Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：把缺词处加一个漏符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.

I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.

Answer

1.holding 变成hold

2.passes 变成passed

3.much 变成well/clearly

4.shoulder 变成shoulders

5.toward 变成 to/into

6.himself 变成him

7.he 前加and

8.a去掉

9.during 变成when

10.never 变成 ever

【解析】

1. 变成hold 考查动词用法。此处used to意为：过去常常，to是不定式符号。故用动词原形

2. 变成passed 考查动词的时态。根据前面的I was only four可知，用一般过去时。

3. 变成well/clearly 考查副词。根据句意可知，我很清楚地记得我的爷爷。此处very much是多的意思，不合题意

4. 变成shoulders 考查名词的复数。根据常理“人有两个肩膀”。所以，用复数形式

5. 变成 to/into 考查介词。根据句意可知，这里指：黑胡子变成了白胡子。所以，用turn to或into的形式

6. himself 变成him 考查代词。句意：他的深沉的声音把他和别人区别开来。所以，用him。

7. he 前加and 考查连词。根据句中结构可知He had a deep voice, （which set him apart from others in our small town,）和he was strong and powerful.是并列关系。所以，用and连接起来。

8. a去掉 考查固定短语。根据固定短语in fact可知，去掉a

9. 变成when 考查连词。根据they came over to play or do homework with me.是句子，所以，用连词when，during是介词，不能连接状语从句

10. 变成 ever 考查副词。根据句意：他是我认识的最温柔的人。可知将never改为ever。这是语意错误。

考点：短文改错。