Question

阅读下面短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

Social practice has been more and more popular in schools. Senior school students are asked to get involved in the community and get some ideas of it.

Surely, social practice does good to senior school students in many ways. Firstly, social practice can offer students a chance to get in touch with society and deal with different kinds of people. In this way students can gain some precious social experience, which will be of great use to their future career. Secondly, students can apply what they have learned in class to practical work. Thus, it enables students to get to know themselves more clearly. Thirdly, social practice can bring them some financial reward and make them more independent of their family.

However, some problems may arise if no correct guidance is made. For example, some students get overly interested in social practice and want to work full-time and earn more money. Consequently, they will neglect their studies. At the same time, through social practice, some students are likely to get in touch with the dark side of society, which will affect their future values.

【写作内容】

1. 以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。

2. 以约120个词就“社会实践”谈谈你的看法，内容包括：

1) 你对于社会实践的认识；

2) 你或你朋友所经历过的一次社会实践；

3) 认为如何协调好学习与社会实践的关系。

【写作要求】

1. 作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。

2. 作文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。

【评分标准】概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。

Answer

The passage states the benefits and the problems of social practice for senior school students. It enriches students’ social experience, allows them to know themselves better and rewards them with money, but it may affect their studies and values.

Knowledge is a treasure, but practice is the key to it. Nowadays, more students have opportunities to join in various social activities, including military training, voluntary work in a community service, a part-time job in a supermarket, etc. They learn how to serve, how to cooperate and how to solve problems. Gradually they will become strong-willed, kind-hearted and enthusiastic in study and life.

Two years ago, I organized a team of classmates to a Charity House where orphans and the disabled live. There we told stories to the blind, we drew beautiful pictures for the deaf, we helped friends in the wheelchair go around. It was the visit that made me realize that helping others should not be only an empty talk and that life is worth cherishing.

Of course, we must strike a balance between study and social practice, never allowing social activities to take priority over schoolwork. After all, senior school stage is a vital period for students to obtain knowledge and get prepared for their future. Therefore, I strongly suggest that we make full use of our spare time and holiday to participate in that. Only in this way can we refuse to shut ourselves in the campus.

【解析】

试题分析：题目要求用约30个词概括短文的主要内容，再用约120个词写一篇作文，谈谈对“社会实践”的看法。写作要点包括：对社会实践的认识；你或朋友的一次实践经历；如何协调好学习与社会实践的关系等三个方面。作文不能直接引用短文的内容，可以写亲身经历，也可以写虚构的故事；不得出现真实姓名和学校的名字；不要出现标点和拼写错误，尽量保持卷面整洁、字体美观；注意行文的连贯性。

亮点说明：

范文首先用约三十个词概括短文大意。短文主要讲的是中学生参加社会实践的利与弊。参与社会实践能够丰富学生的社会经验，更好地了解自我，同时还能得到一定的报酬；但是社会实践可能会影响学生的学习和价值观。

范文涵盖了所有写作要点，并注意语句的连贯性，也进行了适当的拓展；范文还使用了定语从句、宾语从句、强调句、倒装等语法知识，具备较强的语言运用能力。

语法方面：定语从句where orphans and the disabled live；强调句It was the visit that made me realize...；宾语从句that helping others should not be only an empty talk；虚拟语气that we make full use of our spare time；倒装Only in this way can we refuse to shut ourselves in the campus.等，显示了较强的语法功底，语法知识运用娴熟，也使作文句式变得多样；

篇章结构方面：范文注意使用nowadays, gradually, two years ago, of course, after all, therefore等来衔接句子和段落，使表达变得更有条理；

短语和搭配方面：范文使用了the key to, have opportunities to do, join in, go around, is worth doing, strike a balance between...and, take priority over, get prepared for, participate in等短语和搭配，使作文的内容变得更加充实。

考点：材料作文