Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除

或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

(试题内容如下)

It’s very kind for you to let me know about your beautiful city. Now I’d like to tell you something about your beautiful hometown. It located on the bank of a river and it is a beautiful place to live in. Its economy has been developing rapid in the past 2 decades. More schools and hospitals are available to people. Besides, there are some problems, such as water and air pollution and heavy traffics in rush hours. In my opinion, my hometown should develop its economy scientifically. Something must be doing to prevent water and air pollution or the growth of its population should be brought under the control so that we’ll have a better hometown.

Answer

1.for ---of

2.your—my

3.located 前加is

4.rapid—rapidly

5.to ---for

6.Besides ---However

7.traffcis –traffic

8.doing –done

9.or –and

10.去掉the

【解析】

试题分析：在本文中作者向朋友介绍了自己美丽的家乡。他的家乡位于河边，是一个美丽的适宜居住的地方。在过去的的二十年间经济得到了很大的发展。但是同时带来了诸如空气，水等方面的污染问题。为了有一个更美好的家乡，一定要采取措施去控制污染。

1.for ---of考查介词。It’s very kind for you to let me know about your beautiful city. 固定句型：It is kind of sb to do sth ，“某人这样做真是太好了”， 所以把for改为of。

2.your—my考查代词。Now I’d like to tell you something about your beautiful hometown. 根据上句内容可知是“I”要介绍的是“我”家乡的情况，把your改为my。

3.located 前加is考查动词。It located on the bank of a river。固定短语：be located in/on 坐落于….。本文用的是一般现在时，根据主谓一致原则在located前加is。

4.rapid—rapidly考查副词。. Its economy has been developing rapid in the past 2 decades. 此处是修饰动词develop应该用副词形式，把rapid改为rapidly。

5.to ---for考查介词。More schools and hospitals are available to people. 固定短语：be available for “有效；对…有用”。句意：更多学校和医院可以让人们使用。

6.Besides ---However考查副词。Besides, there are some problems, such as water and air pollution。根据前后句内容可知此处是表示转折关系，而不是递进关系，所以把Besides改为However。

7.traffcis –traffic考查名词。and heavy traffics in rush hours. Traffic是不可数名词，没有复数形式，所以把traffics改为traffic。

8.doing –done考查非谓语动词。Something must be doing to prevent water and air pollution。从内容可知此处是表示被动，结构是：情态动词+be +done，所以把doing改为done。

9.or –and考查连词。Something must be doing to prevent water and air pollution or the growth of its population should be brought under the control。根据内容可知此处是water，air pollution 和the growth of its population是并列关系，是都需要控制的问题，所以把or改为and。

10.去掉the考查冠词。Something must be doing to prevent water and air pollution or the growth of its population should be brought under the control。固定短语：under control“在控制下”，把the去掉。

考点：考查短文改错