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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写得以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加,删除或修改。

增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改: 在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 

       2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不记分。

The environment pollution is more and more seriously today. We have no clean water to drink it because of water pollution. And when trees cut down, some animals disappear. There was more and more dirty smoke in the air. People’s health has been greatly affecting by air, noise and water pollution. Many people have died of disease caused by pollution. In order to live t学科网(www.zxxk.com)--教育资源门户,提供试卷、教案、课件、论文、素材及各类教学资源下载,还有大量而丰富的教学相关资讯!he better life, it’s time for us to protect our world.

   Firstly, we shouldn’t throw away rubbish everywhere. And we should recycle, reduce and reuse things, what saves money and reduces pollution. Use things so long as possible. Don’t use plastic bags. Besides, we must plant more trees and stop people cut them down. We hope our world will be more and more beautiful.

 

1.seriously---serious 2.drink it ----把it 去掉 3.when trees---后加are 4.There was ---there is 5.affecting---affected 6.disease----diseases 7.the----a 8.what----which 9.so long as---as long as 10.top people cut----stop people cutting 【解析】 试题分析:如今环境污染日益严重。不仅人们没有干净可饮用的水,而且由于树木遭到砍伐,一些动物也灭绝了。人们的健康受到了空气,噪音和水污染的严重影响。为了过上更美好的生活,作者呼吁到了人们该治理污染,保护环境的时候了。 1.。The environment pollution is more and more seriously today.。系动词is后应该跟形容词做表语,所以把seriously改为serious。 2.。We have no clean water to drink it。此处是不定式做定语,不定式的动词和被修饰的名词之间是逻辑上的动宾关系,故去掉it。 3.。And when trees cut down。此句中tree和谓语cut down之间是被动关系,应该用被动形式,在cut前加are。 4.。There was more and more dirty smoke in the air.。根据语境可知此处是说现在的情况,应该用一般现在时,把was改为is。 5.。People’s health has been greatly affecting by air,。根据句意可知此处是现在完成时的被动形式 ,把affecting 改为affected。 6.。Many people have died of disease caused by pollution.。disease是可数名词,应该用复数形式,把disease改为diseases。 7.。In order to live the better life,。 固定短语:live a….. life“过着……的生活”,所以把the改为a。 8.。what saves money and reduces pollution.。此处是非限制性定语从句,what不引导定语从句,改为which。 9.so -- as。Use things so long as possible. 固定短语:as …..as possible“尽可能”,把so改为as。 10. cut---- cutting。we must plant more trees and stop people cut them down.固定短语:stop sb from doing sth“阻止某人做某事”,所以把cut改为cutting。 考点:考查短文改错。
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阅读下面短文,根据上下文填入适当的词语,或使用括号中的词语的适当形式填空。

On keeping a Diary in English

     Keeping a diary in English is one of the 1.___   __ (effect) ways to improve our English writing ability.

2.______ (compare) with other forms of writing, it is shorter and takes 3.______ time. It can help us to develop the habit of thinking in English. 4.______ we persist in t学科网(www.zxxk.com)--教育资源门户,提供试卷、教案、课件、论文、素材及各类教学资源下载,还有大量而丰富的教学相关资讯!his practice, gradually we’ll learn how to express ourselves in English. In keeping a diary in English, we certainly run up against many 5.____  __(difficult). In the first place, 6.______ often happens that we have trouble 7._________(find) appropriate words and phrases to give expression to our mind. Secondly, there are many idiomatic ways of saying things in Chinese. And it is extremely学科网(www.zxxk.com)--教育资源门户,提供试卷、教案、课件、论文、素材及各类教学资源下载,还有大量而丰富的教学相关资讯! hard for us to put them into English properly.

     As far as I 8.____  __ (concern), my suggestion is that we should always have a notebook and a Chinese-English dictionary within easy reach. Whenever something beats us, we can first put it down in our notebook and then consult our dictionary. We can also turn to our English teacher for help, if necessary. In short, I believe that it is 9.______ great use to keep a diary in English for 10.______ development of our writing skills.

 

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This was my grandmother's first Christmas without grandfather, and before he passed away we had promised grandfather that we would make this her best Christmas ever. When my parents and I      at her house, we found she had waited up all night for us. The house did seem a little    without grandfather.

Grandfather had always said that the Christmas      was the most important decoration of all. So we immediately set to work on the beautiful artificial tree that was stored in grandfather's closet (壁橱). Through our efforts, we finally stepped back to    our handiwork. It looked beautiful.    something was missing.

"Where's your star?" I asked.

The star was my grandmother's favorite part of the tree.

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As we emptied the boxes and    no star, my grandmother's eyes filled with tears. Grandfather had given it to grandmother some fifty years ago on their first Christmas together. It brought them great happiness. Now, on her first Christmas without him, the star was    , too.

"Don't worry, Grandmother," I    her. "We'll find it for you."

My mother and I formed a search    . "Let's start in on the closet where the ornaments (装饰品) were," Mother said. "Maybe the star just fell out of the box."

That sounded    , so I began to search the closet. I thought I tried every    , but no star. I could see grandmother was    , although she tried not to show it.

"What’s in this wrapped box?” Mother suddenly called out. "It was at the bottom of father’s closet."

Grandmother took the box in    and opened it. Her face    when she unfolded the paper and pulled out a golden star. There was a(n)    attached.

Don't be angry with me, dear. I broke your star while packing the decorations, and I couldn't    to tell you. Thought it was time for a new one. I hope it brings you as much    as the first one. Merry Christmas!

Love,

Bryant

So grandmother's tree had a star after all, a star that expressed their everlasting love for one another. And we were glad we were able to make this Christmas    for her.

1.A. arrivedB. looked C. stayed  D. worked

2.A. noisy B. emptyC. safeD. clean

3.A. flower  B. bell   C. stocking D. tree

4.A. admireB. repairC. paintD. design

5.A. Or   B. SoC. ButD. And

6.A. mightB. must   C. need  D. will

7.A. packed          B. decided     C. covered D. searched

8.A. made    B. leftC. found    D. felt

9.A. gone   B. hidden     C. brokenD. forgotten

10.A. warnedB. persuadedC. reminded D. comforted

11.A. gameB. class  C. company        D. party

12.A. challengingB. reasonableC. pleasantD. difficult

13.A. suggestion   B. directionC. possibilityD. method

14.A. ashamedB. shockedC. disappointedD. frightened

15.A. fear      B. reliefC. angerD. surprise

16.A. clearedB. brightenedC. darkened   D. tightened

17.A. article B. note       C. receiptD. poem

18.A. bear    B. affordC. wait  D. agree             

19.A. peace   B. changeC. luck  D. joy

20.A. special B. funnyC. relaxingD. favorite

 

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    A major source of teen stress is school exams, and test anxiety is not uncommon. When you recognize your teen is under stress, how can parents help your teen stay calm before an exam?

    Be involved. Parents need to be involved in their teen’s work 1. What they look for is your presence — to talk, to cry, or simply to sit with them quietly. Communicate openly with your teen. Encourage your teen to express his worries and fears, but don’t let them focus on those fears.

    Help them get organized.   2. Together , you and your teen can work out a time—table in which he can study for what he knows will be on the test.

    Provide a calm setting. Help your teen set up a quiet place to study and protect his privacy. Give them a nutritious diet. It is important for your teen to eat a healthy, balanced diet during exam times to focus and do his best. 3. If this happens, encourage your teen to eat light meals or sandwiches. A healthy diet, rather than junk food, is best for reducing stress.

  4. Persuade your teenager to get some sleep and /or do something active when he needs a real break from studying. Making time for relaxation, fun, and exercise are all important in reducing stress. Help your teen balance his time so that he will feel comfortable taking time out from studying to spend time with friends or rest.

Show a positive attitude.   5.   Your panic, anxiety and blame contribute to your teen’s pressure. Make your teen feel accepted and valued for his efforts. Most importantly, reassure your teen that things will be all right , no matter what the results are.

A. A parent’s attitude will dictate their teen’s emotions.

B. Exam stress can make some teens lose their appetite.

C. They will only make the situation worse.

D. Encourage your teen to relax.

E. The best thing is simply to listen.

F. Help your teen think about what he has to study and plan accordingly.

G. Your teen may also make negative comments about themselves

 

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The Festival of Cultures is an annual event to celebrate the wide range of cultures found in our great state. People representing 40 cultural groups will share their traditions and customs. Here are just a few of the festival's many activities.

    Crafts: See the fine art of basket weaving from Vietnam and Zimbabewe. Watch the delicate art of making paper umbrellas from Thailand and the decorative craft of paper picado, or paper cutting, from Mexico. All craft demonstrations provide a firsthand view of how things are made. You will appreciate the process involved in making these products.

     Music and Dance: Experience musical instruments that you have never heard before. Listen to the music of a sho from Japan, a bull-roarer from Australia, a sitar from India, and a chakay from Tailand. You will also be entertained by folk dances from around the world, such as the troika from Russia and the mayim mayim from Israel. From 1:00 P.M. to 3:00 P.M. on August 14, special folk-dancing classes for children will be offered. Children ranging in age from 6 – 8 can learn the kinderpolka from Germany. Children ranging in age from 9 – 12 can learn the raspa from Mexico.

     Storytelling: Listen for hours as professional storytellers charm you with captivating tales. Fables, folktales, and ballads from various countries will be told. By popular demand, Gwendolyn Washington, a famous African American storyteller, is back.

     Food: Enjoy irresistible foods from other countries, such as gyros from Greece, seafood paella from Spain, crepes from France, and tandoori chicken from India. These tasty dishes will be difficult to pass up.

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    The festival of Cultures is sponsored by the World Marketplace. For more information about the festival, call (800) 555 – 0199.

1.In the festival, you are most likely to see the art of making _______.

A. paper.   B. umbrellas.    C. bamboo beds. D. flower vases.

2.Which of these is a dance from Germany?

A. The troika.         B. The raspa.          C. The kinderpolka.         D. The mayim mayim

3.The underlined word irresistible means ________.

A. in large quantities           B. with natural ta学科网(www.zxxk.com)--教育资源门户,提供试卷、教案、课件、论文、素材及各类教学资源下载,还有大量而丰富的教学相关资讯!stes

C. not able to be refused                     D. hot but delicious

4.For a family with children aged 612, which day would be the best bargain for visiting the festival?

A. August 11   B. August 12    C. August 13     D. August 14

 

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Losing weight comes with a lot of health benefits—including making your brain sharper.

Yes, it turns out that overweight may damage cognitive functions (认知功能) such as memory and attention. There have been few studies of overweight and cognitive functioning, possibly because it is generally believed that it is not a primary risk cause for poor cognitive performance. Losing weight, therefore, may help improve these mental functions, according to a new research led by John Gunstad, assistant professor of psychology at Kent State University.

Growing evidence suggests that being fat is linked to cognitive deficits (缺陷). So Gunstad and his team guessed that losing weight might improve mental function. For their study, they measured memory and attention in a group of 150 overweight participants, some of whom had some kind of operation for weight loss and some did not. All of the volunteers completed mental skills tests to assess their abilities of memory and attention at the beginning of学科网(www.zxxk.com)--教育资源门户,提供试卷、教案、课件、论文、素材及各类教学资源下载,还有大量而丰富的教学相关资讯! the study, and again 12 weeks later. To begin with, about 24% of the patients showed damaged learning and 23% showed signs of poor memory when tested. At the end of the study, those who had lost weight after operation improved their scores into the average or above average range for cognitive functions. Scores for the volunteers who didn’t lose weight dropped even further.

The study helped Gunstad to find out whether losing weight had any effect on mental function. Now that he’s seen the positive effect that weight loss can have on memory and attention, he says he will next study those who choose to lose weight by the traditional way—eating healthier and getting more active. He expects that losing weight in this way will have a similarly positive effect on the brain. “If we can improve the condition with operations, then we can probably produce the same change with behavioral weight loss as well,” he says.

1.There is less research on overweight and cognitive functions because researchers _____.

A. believe overweight only affects our body

B. have focused on ways to sharpen people’s mind

C. do not consider overweight a main cause for low cognitive ability

D. are clear about the relation between weight and mental functions

2.The result of Gunstad’s study shows that ______.

A. losing weight has little effect on people’s memory

B. losing weight can improve people’s mental functions

C. overweight people are likely to have psychology problems

D. overweight people’s abilities of concentration differ greatly

3.What is Gunstad planning to prove next in his research?

A. Slim people are smarter than overweight people.

B. Healthy diet is better than exercise in losing weight.

C . Traditional ways of losing weight are better than operation.

D. Overweight people will get smarter by taking more exercise.

4.Which of the following is the best title for th e text?

A. Body Weight and Health

B. Losing Weight by Operation

C. Ways to Improve Mental Functions

D. Losing Weight to S harpen Your MindD

 

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