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With the national college entrance examination approach , many students are so worried about the coming exam to fall asleep at night and even suffer from mentally illness. It’s a fairly common phenomena among us students. Here is some effective methods for you to adopt. First of all, you should spend a plenty of time preparing for the test. Secondly, it is no need to feel nervous when you have some bad emotions. I think take a deep breath is a helpful way to reduce your stress. Last but not least, you ought to believe yourself and keep a good state of mind. Follow my tips, but you will overcome your exam anxiety.
One day, about ten years ago, while working at the cash register in the gift shop at my University Museum of Natural History, I saw 1._______ elderly couple come in with a little girl in a wheelchair. As I looked 2.________ ( close ) at this girl, I found that she was fixed on her chair. I then realized she had no arms or legs, just a head, a neck and upper body, 3._______ ( dress ) in a little white skirt. As the couple wheeled her up to me, I turned my head toward the girl. When I took the money from her grandparents, I looked back 4.________ the girl, who was giving me the most optimistic, largest smile I had ever seen. All of a sudden, her handicap was gone and all I saw was this beautiful girl, 5.________ smile just melted me 6._______ almost instantly gave me a completely new sense of 7._______ life is all about. She took me from a poor, unhappy college student and 8.___________ ( bring ) me into her world; a world of smiles, love and 9.__________ ( warm ). I’m a successful business man now and whenever I think about the troubles of the world, I think about that little girl and the remarkable lesson about life that she taught 10._________ .
When I started riding a bike a couple of years ago, I didn't think my involvement would ever be more serious than the occasional short ride. But as I built strength, my friends _______me to step up my training and try some longer trips, The first one to come along was a 150-mile trip, the MS-150, an annual _______ that raises money to fight AIDS.
When I registered，the idea seemed fantastic and I trained with ____.However，as the time for the ride approached，my selfdoubts ____ beyond my endurance(忍耐)．I ____ wanted to raise money for the charity，but I didn’t really want to bike all those miles for two days straight.
The ride began on a beautiful Sunday morning in the Georgia countryside，and for the first few hours I felt ____.This was just the experience I had ____，and my spirits were high.__ __ by the end of the day，I felt tired out. If the body is ____ to the mind，here was evidence. Every ____ my brain pushed out seemed to travel right down to my legs. “I can’t handle this” became a leg cramp (抽筋)，and “Everyone else is a better rider” translated into ____ of breath. I was sure I’d have to ____.
As I topped the crest (顶) of a hill，the beautiful sunset kept me going for a few minutes more. Then in the distance，I saw a lone woman riding very slowly ____ the bright red sun. I ___ that the person looked different in some way，but I couldn’t tell why. So I pushed myself to ___.There she was，riding along slowly but ____，with a slight and determined smile on her face and she had only one leg.
My focus changed in that instant. For a whole day I’d been ____ my body. But now I knew it wasn’t the body，but the ___ that would help me reach my goal. It rained all the second day. I never saw the one-legged biker again，but I pushed on without ____，knowing she was out there with me somewhere. And at the end of the day，still feeling ____，I completed the 150mile trip.
1.A. encouraged B．forbade C．forced D．warned
2.A. accident B．event C．incident D．affair
3.A. care B．ease C．enthusiasm D．difficulty
4.A. achieved B．gained C．progressed D．advanced
5.A. still B．even C．rather D．then
6.A. nervous B．disappointed C．wonderful D．refreshed
7.A. assumed B．appreciated C．admired D．imagined
8.A. But B．Therefore C．Meanwhile D．Moreover
9.A. opposite B．connected C．exposed D．equal
10.A. cause B．reason C．excuse D．effect
11.A. holding B．saving C．catching D．shortness
12.A. quit B．continue C．insist D．fade
13.A. on B．against C．down D．over
14.A. observed B．watched C．noticed D. overlooked
15.A. put up B．look up C．catch up D．take up
16.A. steadily B．abruptly C．closely D．narrowly
17.A. trusting B．doubting C．cheating D．fighting
18.A. strength B．honesty C．will D．power
19.A. struggling B．arguing C．discussing D. complaining
20.A. strongB．weak C．healthy D．spiritless
My mother is a diligent and kind woman. She is very busy from morning till night. As a teacher, she works hard. ___1.__Both my brother and I love her dearly as she loves us.
My mother has been teaching math at a middle school in my hometown. She goes to work early in the morning and does not return home until late in the afternoon. ___2._She treats them with patience and teaches them well. For her excellent quality and very good teaching results, she has been elected as a model teacher several times.
___3.___Every day, when she comes back home from work, she sets about doing housework, sweeping the living room and bedrooms or cleaning the furniture, and putting everything in good order. She seems to be busy all the time. As she has been very busy working every day, she looks older than her age. But she looks as cheerful and happy as ever. Mother never buys expensive dresses for herself, but she often buys some inexpensive but high quality clothes for us. ___4.___ She just eats a plain meal outside when she is too busy to cook herself. She lives a busy yet simple life, without any complaints.
Often she says to us, “work while you work, and play while you play. That is the way to be happy and gay. If you do not work, you will become lazy and be of no use to society”. What a piece of good advice this is! __ 5.__ This advice of hers will always serve as a guide to my behavior. My mother is great indeed, and I always feel proud of her.
A. She enjoys listening to classic music.
B. As a mother, she takes good care of us and gives us every comfort.
C. She loves her students and cares for them.
D. She never goes to expensive restaurants to enjoy meals.
E. My mother is hard-working and never wastes money.
F. I never forget it and always bear it in my mind.
G. Can you tell us something about your mother?
A huge cloud of dust rose and an overpass disappeared. This was the scene in Zhuzhou，Hunan Province on May 17.Nine people were killed and 16 injured.
Things were similar last year in the Sichuan earthquake. Thousands of people were buried in the ruins and lost their lives. What if we could have warned them?
People are always racking their brains to find a way of preventing buildings’ collapse. Better materials and technology help，but they are not a solution.
Just like humans，a building has its own life cycle from “birth” to “death”．If we know when a building is going to collapse，we can repair it in advance or get out of it before it falls.
Now，scientists at the University of Illinois have developed a material that turns red before it breaks. The invention could be used in things like climbing ropes or bridge supports.
The research was led by Nancy Sottos，a professor at the university’s Beckman Institute，and Douglas Davis，a graduate research assistant.
The secret behind the colorchanging material is a type of molecule (分子)．A molecule is a group of atoms held together by chemical bonds. Imagine you and your friends standing in a circle，holding hands. Each person stands for one atom，your hands represent the bonds，and the entire circle represents a molecule. If one person lets go of his or her hands，the molecule changes color.
The research team put the molecule into a soft material. When the researchers stretched the material，it turned bright red for a few seconds before it broke into two pieces. When they repeatedly stretched and relaxed the material，without breaking it，it only turned a little red.
The major problem is that light can get rid of the red color. When the team shone bright light on the molecule，the broken bond was fixed，and the color disappeared.
If the bright light keeps the red color from appearing，the material’s warning system will be useless. Scientists still have a lot of work to do before the colorchanging molecules can be used outside the lab.
1.What does the passage mainly introduce?
A．The collapse of an overpass in Zhuzhou，Hunan Province.
B．The Sichuan earthquake
C．A material that turns red before it breaks.
D．A way of preventing building from collapsing.
2.The underlined words “racking their brains” in the third paragraph mean ________.
A．suffering a lot B．collecting beyond imagination
C．losing a lot D．thinking very hard
3.Which of the following is a WRONG statement?
A．Thousands of people died from the collapse of buildings in the Sichuan earthquake because they hadn’t been warned.
B．There is no building that will never collapse.
C．A new material has been applied to buildings to warn people of collapse.
D．A colorchanging material can turn red before it breaks.
4.What can we infer from the passage?
A．The colorchanging molecules are certain to be used outside the lab.
B．There will be no collapse with the help of the colorchanging material.
C．There is a long way to go before the material can be applied.
D．The problem caused by bright light will be solved by scientists.
A tent can be one of the more costly items on your camping equipment shopping list. It is definitely something that you need to consider carefully.
By seeing a tent for real you will be able to get a better impression of its size and construction in the traditional shop. However，the downside is that，unless you are experienced，you may miss out some of the details that the manufacturer’s promotional material makes clear. Cheap tents often look similar to the quality models they are mimicking(模仿)，but you can be sure that they use inferior(次的) materials and probably have lower design standards.
Shop staff are often campers themselves. That means they usually can give lots of advice. If a shop assistant agrees with your own conclusions，that will be great；if they try to change your decision with a clear and reasonable argument，then that will be worth considering；if they just try to bamboozle(欺骗)，or even bully，you then walk away.
The Internet is a wonderful tool，and so long as you know how to make the most of search engines and put in a little effort，you really have the perfect answer waiting to be found. That answer will be different for every camper as each of us has different needs. Don’t be surprised to see your favorite criticized somewhere，but if you see too much criticism，then you had better start thinking again. No problem. You won’t have spent anything yet，so think of it positively as a large expense saved.
Probably the best approach，if you have the time，is to research tents online and make a short list. Then try to inspect those tents at nearby shops. Then you can make a final decision on where to buy your chosen model based purely on total cost.
1.The underlined word “downside” in Paragraph 2 means “________”．
A．disadvantage B．instruction C．argumentD．principle
2.It can be concluded from the third paragraph that________.
A．shop assistants usually enjoy going camping
B．shop assistants usually have practical advice
C．you should consider your idea repeatedly
D．it is impolite for you to trouble shop assistants
3.You can make use of the Internet to________.
A．meet your different needs
B．find the answer for every camper
C．help you out of trouble
D．find your favorite tent
4.Which of the following would be the main idea of this passage?
A．It is good to buy your tent in the traditional shop.
B．You’d better buy a tent with the help of the Internet.
C．Better buy a tent combining seeing tents for real in shops and researching them online.
D．Going camping is really beneficial to your health.
