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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:

1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    My cousin Tim is pupil. He is clever, and he is very naughty. Today he fails in his math and English exam. Getting his report, he was deep worried. His poor report was required to be signed by his father at home. On the way to home an idea appeared on his mind. He found his father was reading a newspaper before he got home. Tim said to his father jokingly,

“Dad, can you write your name with all of your eyes shut?” His father replied.

“Of course not, my dear.” And his father did so. Tim was satisfied with the report already signed by his father.

 

1.is后面加a 2.and改为but 3.fails改为failed 4.exam改为exams 5.deep改为deeply 6.去掉to 7.On改为in 8.Before改为when 9.all改为both 10.去掉not 【解析】 试题分析:本题考查较为细致,要求考生要特别耐心答题中注意句子中人称和数是否一致,时态是否一致。各种词性之间的区别以及一些常用句型,固定短语的应用。一般的这类题型不会出现太复杂的单词和句子,这类题型考察基础知识较多。平时应注重积累,熟记一些句型及惯用结构。修改前先细读短文,标出出错的位置,改完以后还得细读短文,看看改过后的短文是否语意通顺,符合逻辑。 1. 2.2】and改为but 上下文之间存在和转折关系。句义:他很聪明,但是很调皮。 3.3】fails改为failed 本文讲述的是一个过去发生的事情,所以使用一般过去时的时态。 4.4】exam改为exams 前面有math和English两个词修饰,说明指的是多个考试,故使用复数形式exams。 5.5】deep改为deeply 本句使用deeply修饰形容词worried,deeply表示的是抽象意义上的深入;deep表示的是具体意义上的深入。 6.6】去掉to 固定搭配on one’s way home,其中的home是一个副词,前面不需要使用介词to,单独使用即可。 7.7】On改为in 在某人的脑海里使用in one’s mind。 8.8】Before改为when 固定句式be doing sth when…正在做某事在这时…;when后面接的句子表示的是意料之外的结果。 9.9】all改为both 一个人只有两只眼睛,两者都要使用“both”。 10.0】去掉not 根据下句:Tim was satisfied[with the report already signed by his father.可知他的父亲同意了,所以使用肯定的形式。 考点:考察短文改错
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