Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文．请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

              增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

              删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

              修改：在错的词下划一横线（＿），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

              注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处

   Tim, I am Li Hua． This is my last year of high school, and I'll graduate this summer．I'm eighteen year old．

    There is three people in my family and I'm the only one child, who is very common in Chinese families．My father work in a factory and my mother is a teacher． We lived a happy life together．

     I'm cheerful boy． Besides my courses, I have much hobbies, like playing football, basketball and swimming．In the past, I collected in a lot of stamps, which are very preciously now because we seldom post a letter nowadays．I wonder if you can tell me something about myself, your family and daily school life．

Answer

1.year 后加s

2.there is 改为are

3. who改为which

4.My father work 改为works

5.lived改为live

6.I’m cheerful boy加a

7. much改为many

8. collected in去掉in

9. precisously改为precious

10. myself改为yourself

【解析】

1.year 后加s 考查数词。句意：我已经18岁了。

2.there is 改为are 考查主谓一致。There people 三个人所以谓语动词用复数形式。

3. who改为which 考查定语从句。Which代表这件事在中国是很普遍的。

4.My father work 改为works 考查动词。叙述客观事实用一般现在时，主语是第三人称单数，故加s.

5.lived改为live 考查时态。句意：我们过着幸福的生活。时态用一般现在时。

6.I’m cheerful boy加a 考查冠词。 句意：我是一个快乐的男孩。

7. much改为many 考查形容词。修饰可数名词hobbies，用many.

8. collected in去掉in 考查动词。Collect 是及物动词。

9. precisously改为precious 考查副词。句意：我收集了许多邮票，这是非常珍贵的邮票。Precious做表语。

10. myself改为yourself 考查反身代词。句意：我想知道你能不能告诉我一些关于你自己的事情。

考点：短文改错。