Question

据报道,我国学生近视率居世界第一。造成这一现象的原因是多方面的, 请你以 "Why are more and more children getting short-sighted?" 为题, 写一篇英语短文。

内容主要包括：

1. 造成学生近视的原因；

2. 如何保护视力？

注意: 1.词数120左右；

2.可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯；

3.短文的开头已经写好, 不计入总词数。

参考词汇:  近视率 rate of myopia

Why are more and more children getting short-sighted?

It is reported that the rate of myopia of Chinese students is ranked as the highest in the world _______________________________________________________________________

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Answer

One possible version：

 Dear Li Hua,

I’ve just got your letter and I know learning a foreign language can be challenging for some people. However, there are many things you can do to overcome these difficulties.

    Firstly, obtain as large a vocabulary as possible. It is a good habit to do some reading every day and remember some typical sentences. Practice makes perfect. Therefore, doing enough exercises can definitely improve your listening and writing. In this way you are sure to improve your English.

    As for examination anxiety, it’s unnecessary for you to work too late before the exam. Instead, you’d better go to bed earlier than usual, otherwise you would feel tired the next day. It is also suggested that a jug of milk may help you get a sound sleep.

    In addition, consult your teachers if necessary.

    I do hope my advice is helpful to you.

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，要求考生根据所给的写作要求和提纲，确定文章的中心思想，然后紧紧围绕中心思想展开写作。注意文章文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如. there are many things you can do to overcome these difficulties、as large a vocabulary as possible、It is a good habit to do some reading 、you’d better go to bed earlier than usual还运用了虚拟语气otherwise you would feel tired the next day ；以及主语从句It is also suggested that等。并注意了句子的衔接如：and、however、in addition、as for等等。层次分明，表达流畅。

考点：提纲作文。