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假设你是李华,几天前你从某国外网站购买了一支录音笔,现在你发电子邮件到该网站反映以下问题:1.音质不太清楚;2.操作不简便;3.经常出问题。

期待的解决办法:1.退货退款;2.修理或调换。

注意:1.字数不得少于100字,开头结尾不计入总字数;

2.可适当增加细节,试行文连贯;

3.参考词汇  录音笔  recording pen

Dear Sir or Madam,

                                                                            

                                                                             

                                                                            

Best wishes,

Yours,

li Hua

 

Dear Sir or Madam,   I am writing to tell you something about the recording pen . I bought it from your website several days ago .However , there seems to be something wrong with it .First , the voice isn’t so clear as you claimed .Second ,it’s not easy to operate , which has caused me much trouble .What I expect is a human –friendly one. Third , it often breaks down , while a recording pen at such a price shouldn’t have had so many problems.   Due to its poor quality and much inconvenience it has caused, I wonder whether you can do something about it .I would appreciate it very much if I can get my money back . I’ll send it back to you as soon as you return the money to me. If it can’t be helped, I wish you could have it repaired or changed. I’m looking forward to your early reply . Best wishes, Yours , Li Hua 【解析】 试题分析:本篇书面表达是要求写封电子邮件,反映所购买产品的质量问题。电子邮件是人们日常生活中常用的一种应用文体,同学们应该对写作格式很熟悉,但是在写作时要注意以下方面:一. 因为是反映问题,所以要求语言简洁,条理清楚,把存在的问题和自己的要求表达准确;二. 虽然产品存在问题,但是语言仍要委婉,礼貌显示出作者的修养;三. 时态方面, 因为是叙述产品现在存在的问题,所以可以用一般现在时态,期待解决办法部分可以使用将来时态。四. 注意适当增加细节,使语言更为通顺,行文更为连贯。 【亮点说明】文章要点全面,详略得当。关联词语 first。。。second 。。。third 等词的使用使文章层次分明,脉络清楚。其次, 文中定语从句which has caused me much trouble . 并列句while a recording pen at such a price shouldn’t… 条件状语从句if I can get my money back和主语从句等的使用丰富了范文的句式,也成了文章的一大亮点。此外, 作者在表述要求和解决办法时使用了I wonder whether…; .I would appreciate it very much if…和 I wish you could…等等,这些委婉的措辞显得作者态度特别礼貌诚恳,使人不忍拒绝。 考点:考查提纲作文。
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