Question

（2009.陕西卷）书面表达（满分30分）

假定你是李华。在一个英文网络论坛上, 你看到一个名叫Grown-up的中学生发帖（post）寻求帮助, 请根据帖子内容, 写作要点和要求回贴。

 

写作要点：

1. 告诉Grown-up要理解母亲；

2. 给Grown-up提出解决问题的具体建议。

要求：

1. 短文需写在答题卡的指定区域。

2. 短文词数不少于80（不含已写好的部分）。

3. 内容充实, 结构完整, 语意连贯。

4. 书写须清晰、工整。 Ks5

Answer

Hi, Grown-up,

As a student of your age, I understand your situation. The problem you are facing is common among our teenagers. However, it should be wise not to do anything that may hurt her feelings. Here are a few suggestions.

First, it’s advisable to talk more with your mom. Heart to heart talks help you understand each other better. They are also opportunities to let her know your ideas of and attitudes toward many things.

Second, you should learn to do your own things well, proving to your mom that you are already a “Grown-up”. It’s even better if you could share more of the housework, such as cleaning, washing and cooking.

【解析】考生在写作中应该注意如下几点：

1. 文体：应用文（电子邮件）。

2. 主体时态：一般现在时。

3. 主体人称：第二人称。

4. 内容要点：① 问题介绍；②建议一；③建议二；④我的愿望。

亮点句式：

1.         The problem you are facing is common among our teenagers.

2.         Here are a few suggestions.

3.         it’s advisable to talk more with your mom.

4.         They are also opportunities to let her know your ideas of and attitudes towards many things.

5.         Second, you should learn to do your own things well.