Question

书面表达

在学习和生活中，我们会有许多的第一次。第一次独自旅行，第一次克服困难，第一次赢得比赛……每个第一次都会带给我们不同的收获和感受。我校英文网站正在开展以“My first time to________”为主题的征文活动。请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈让你记忆犹新的第一次。

内容提示：(1) What happened?

(2)How did you feel?

要求：(1)中心突出，语义连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；

(2)文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；

(3)词数80左右。

My first time to _____________

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Answer

例文

My first time to swim

As we all know, everyone has his unforgettable memories. I still remember the first time I learned to swim.

Last summer holiday, I wanted to learn how to swim. I asked my father to teach me. I went to the swimming pool with my father. He taught me how to swim. At first, I was afraid of diving in the water. And I felt uncomfortable in the water. But my father always encouraged me. He said he would protect me. Then I began to swim，but I couldn't swim forward at all. It made me upset. Then my father told me how to move，how to stretch out my hands and legs. Slowly I could move a little. It took me about four hours to learn to swim. I felt quite happy.

What an unforgettable experience it was!

【解析】

1.题干解读：本文要求根据“My first time to________”为主题用英语写一篇短文。首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；再根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡平稳、自然流畅。