Question

请以“My trip to——”为题，根据以下要求与提示，用英语写一篇短文，记叙你的一次旅行。

要求：

1.请在题目空格处填入你旅行的地点，如：Beijing，Jinan或Qingdao等；

2.短文中不得出现任何真实的人名、校名及其他相关信息。否则不予评分；

3.不少于60词。

提示：

1. Where did you go?

2. What did you do there?

3. How did you feel about the trip?

My trip to ________

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Answer

My trip to Beijing

Have you ever been to Beijing?I’ve been there once.I went to Beijing by train with my family last summer vacation.

I visited many famous places of interest,such as the Great Wall,the Summer Palace,the Palace Museum and the Bird’s Nest.I took a lot of photos with my camera.On the Great Wall I met some foreigners and I talked with them in English.I told them there’s an old saying.He who has never been to the Great Wall is not a true man.They liked the saying very much and they told me that they were true men at that time.We all laughed happily.I ate Beijing roast duck.It was very delicious.

I felt a little tired but I was happy.I look forward to visiting Beijing again.

【解析】

这是一篇话题作文。题目是“My trip to ”，记叙你的一次旅行。给出了提示要点。提示要点是本文的写作提纲要点。本文人称主要第一人称，时态主要是一般过去时。短文必须包含提示中的所有内容，并做适当发挥。字数应在80-100词。要运用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有连贯性。根据提示要点，列出本文的写作提纲。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。本文提纲：

我的青岛之行

去年暑假，我和家人去了青岛。我们乘火车去了那里，住在海边的一家大旅馆里。我们在那里呆了三天。

第一天，我们沿着海边散步。之后，我们去游泳，在那里拍了很多照片。第二天，我们在一个著名的市场买了许多纪念品。最后一天，我们在海边野餐。当地人表演了很多节目，这让我们很高兴。我们都很开心。这是难忘的。

青岛是游览的好地方。如果我有机会，我会再去那里。