Question

假如你叫李华，5月11日母亲节那天 你为母亲做了很多有意义的事情。请你根据表格中所给信息，用英语写一篇日记。

上午	你用零花钱给母亲买了些鲜花，放在花瓶内
下午	你去市场买菜，为全家人做了一顿简单可口的饭菜
晚饭后	你送给母亲自己制作的贺卡，并祝她节日快乐；告诉母亲要多注意自己的健康，不要过度劳累； 你还保证今后会帮助她做一些家务劳动；母亲感动得留下了眼泪

注意：1.词数80—100 个左右 2.日记的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。3.日记必须包括所有内容要点，但不要逐句翻译，可以假如适当细节和适当发挥，使其通顺、连贯。

参考词汇：pocket money 零花钱 vase 花瓶 overwork 过度劳累 be moved to tears 感动得流泪

11th May SundayToday is Mother’s Day. I love mother so much that I’ve done many things for her.

In the morning, I bought                                                                        

Answer

11th May Sunday Today is Mother’s Day. I love Mother so much that I’ve done many things for her. In the morning I bought many flowers with pocket money and put them in the vase. In the afternoon I went to the market to buy vegetables and cooked a simple but delicious dinner for my family. After supper, I gave Mother the card that I made myself and said “Happy Mother’s Day” to her. Then I told her to pay more attention to her health and not to overwork. I also promised to help her do some housework from today on. Hearing the words, Mother was moved to tears. Today is a special day, warm and meaningful.

【解析】试题分析：这是一篇材料作文，也是一篇日记，本文时态主要是一般过去式，话题是“假如你叫李华，5月11日母亲节那天 你为母亲做了很多有意义的事情。”仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点，列好提纲。写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要适当添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意添加的内容要紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都要包括，缺一不可。语言表达要符合英语习惯。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】：这是一篇比较优秀的作文，本文很好地完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖所有内容要点；应用了我们熟悉的句型和短语Then I told her to pay more attention to her health and not to overwork.等，In the morning，In the afternoon，After supper，Then等表示时间和顺序的短语运用，使文章表达具有条理性，上下文意思连贯，本文语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态，用词准确、句子通顺、行文连贯。