Question

书面表达

本学期我们认识了阳光中学的 Daniel。现在你想把 Daniel 介绍给你的笔友李雷，请根据以 下提示，写一篇 60 词左右的英语短文。

注意：

1.  短文必须包括所有要点，可适当发挥。 2.  短文开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Li Lei,

I would like to introduce my best friend Daniel to you.                                                                                                

Do you want to be friends with him? Please write back to me soon.

Yours, Nancy

Answer

Dear Li Lei,

I would like to introduce my best friend Daniel to you.

He is thirteen years old. He wears glasses and has short hair. He is good at Maths. He likes playing computer games. He is helpful. He often cleans the flats for the elderly. He likes hamburgers and cola. They are not healthy at all. He wants to change his lifestyle. He plans to eat more fruit and vegetables. He wants to swim once a week, He likes wearing sports clothes and trainers because they are light and comfortable. His favourite festival is the Spring Festival because he likes letting off fireworks. He also thinks that people can get together on that day.

Do you want to be friends with him? Please write back to me soon.

Yours, Nancy

【解析】试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，也是一篇书信作文。要求把Daniel介绍给你的笔友李雷。这篇作文难度不大，本文所给材料比较详细，认真阅读表格内的要点提示，短文必须包括所有要点，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。本文主要时态是一般现在时，注意时态时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，词数60 词左右，短文开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数。

【亮点说明】这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯是一篇不错的文章。