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亲爱的同学们,老师建议在你的一生中应该和这些交上好朋友:

      1. 运动:每天锻炼至少半小时;     2. 音乐:闲暇时间听听音乐;

      3. 友善:常帮助别人;             4. 好习惯:早睡早起,健康饮食。

要求:1. 所提示的信息须要全部用上,并适当发挥;

      2. 词数:80词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。

     As your teacher, I want to give you some advice on making friends. I think you should make friends with sports, music, kindness and good habits. You should                                    

 

 

 

 

As your teacher, I want to give you some advice on making friends. I think you should make friends with sports, music, kindness and good habits. You should exercise for at least half an hour every day. It is good for your health. Health is the foundation of everything. Without health, you’ll have nothing. You had better listen to music in your spare time. Listening to music may make give you better mood. You must be kind to others. You often help the people in need. You must also have a good habit like early to bed, and early to rise , and having a healthy diet habit. This helps you keep healthier. If you do that, you’ll have a happy and healthy life. 【解析】本文属于材料作文,主要表达老师给学生的一些人生建议。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑,可适当增加内容。 【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文,很好的完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确运用时态、主谓一致,特别适用一些亮点词句,如at least, half an hour, be good for, foundation, Without, spare, be kind to以及in need。增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,用词准确,句子通顺,行文连贯。 点睛:写作时可以从以下几个方面做起: 认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求,抓住要点,词数符合要求。 构思提纲。有了提纲,我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的,而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥,因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。 初写短文。一切都准备就绪,就可以动笔写作了,在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词,使句子衔接自然。 修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外,还要检查语法结构是否合理,有无重复、啰嗦的语言,大小写是否正确,格式是否正确,词数是否符合要求等。  
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A. dry-cleaning is cheap

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D. cheap clothes last longer

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“Here they are.” he said, “One pair of brown shoes. I’m a bit busy now, but they’ll be ready on Thursday.”

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