Question

书面表达

冬日来临，一场突如其来的暴风雪上周袭击了淮安。请以“Snowstorm hit Huai’an”为题写一篇80字左右短文介绍这次暴风雪的过程。内容包括以下要点：1.这场暴风雪何时降临的；2.暴风雪来临时你及周边人的情况；3.暴风雪结束后你们进行了哪些自救工作。

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Answer

A snowstorm hit Nanjing on Wednesday, 29th January. It got worse in the afternoon. I was at school and Mr Wang told us to go home early. On my way home, the weather was really terrible. We could only hear the wind. Snow continued to fall around us. Suddenly, a strong wind came from behind. We lost our umbrellas in the wind and I nearly fell over. We could do nothing but walk slowly in the storm. At last, we got on a bus and went home. The next day, I heard the noise of traffic. I looked out of the window and saw people were in a hurry to remove the snow.

【解析】试题分析：这是一篇材料作文，提示内容就是本文的写作要点。这些要点构成写作的基本框架。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般过去时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

点睛：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。