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对于“中学生在校是否可以使用手机”,不同学生有不同的看法,请你根据下面表格中的 ...

对于中学生在校是否可以使用手机”,不同学生有不同的看法,请你根据下面表格中的 提示写一篇短文,向某英语报社投稿

观点

赞成

反对

理由

1.便于联系:……

2.获取信息:……

1.浪费时间:……

2.危害身心健康:……

你的观点及理由

 

要求:1.包含所有要点,不逐字翻译,围绕要点适当发挥; 于书写规范工整,条理清晰;

2.文中不得出现真实人名地名校名等;

3.词数:80词左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数

Can middle school students use mobile phones at school?

Nowadays, more and more teenagers use mobile phones. Can middle school students use mobile phones at school? Different students have different opinions about it.                                              

 

 

Can middle school students use mobile phones at school? Nowadays, more and more teenagers use mobile phones. Can middle school students use mobile phones at school? Different students have different opinions about it. Some students think they can use mobile phones at school. First, it’s convenient for them to call their parents, teachers or friends. Second, they can search what they need on mobile phones. For example, they can look up new words and look through news. How ever, some students disagree. They think using mobile phones at school is a waste of time. Many students spend too much time on games and QQ. Besides, it’s unhealthy for the mind and the body, such as hurting eyes, making some bad friends. In my opinion, students can’t use mobile phones at school. It’s bad for our health and study. 【解析】本文属于材料作文,要表达中学生在校使用手机的优点和缺点以及你的观点和理由。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑,可适当增加内容。 【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文,很好的完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确运用时态、主谓一致,特别适用一些亮点词句,如first, second, for example, look up, however, spend...on..., a waste of, besides, in my opinion以及be bad for。增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,用词准确,句子通顺,行文连贯。 点睛:写作时可以从以下几个方面做起: 认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求,抓住要点,词数符合要求。 构思提纲。有了提纲,我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的,而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥,因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。 初写短文。一切都准备就绪,就可以动笔写作了,在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词,使句子衔接自然。 修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外,还要检查语法结构是否合理,有无重复、啰嗦的语言,大小写是否正确,格式是否正确,词数是否符合要求等。  
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