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假如你是Timmy,是一名九年级学生.请根据所给要点给编辑写一封英文信,诉说你的烦恼,并请求帮助.要求语句通顺、意思连贯、词数80﹣90.要点:

1.学校考试…2.知道学好功课很重要,所以

3.父母不允许看电视或上网…4.自拟其他烦恼

Dear Editor,

I am Timmy,a Grade 9student.I am writing to tell you about my problems     

I am not happy.Can you offer me some suggestions?

Yours sincerely,

Timmy.

 

Dear Editor, I am Timmy,a Grade 9student.I am writing to tell you about my problems I have to take many exams at school,and I always feel stressed.I know it is important to learn my lessons well,so I spend a lot of time on each subject.My parents are strict with me.They do not allow me to watch TV or surf the Internet at home.I hardly have any time for my hobbies,such as football and drawing.I used to have some good friends,but now everyone seems to be very busy and we don't have time to chat with each other and have fun. I am not happy.Can you offer me some suggestions? Yours sincerely, Timmy. 【解析】本文属于话题作文,要表达自己的烦恼以及寻求帮助。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑,可适当增加内容。 【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文,很好的完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确运用时态、主谓一致,特别适用一些亮点词句,如 stressed,it is adj to do, spend...on,be strict with, allow sb to do, have time to do以及have fun等。增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,用词准确,句子通顺,行文连贯。 点睛:写作时可以从以下几个方面做起: 认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求,抓住要点,词数符合要求。 构思提纲。有了提纲,我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的,而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥,因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。 初写短文。一切都准备就绪,就可以动笔写作了,在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词,使句子衔接自然。 修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外,还要检查语法结构是否合理,有无重复、啰嗦的语言,大小写是否正确,格式是否正确,词数是否符合要求等。  
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