Question

假如你是Kevin，正和朋友们在北京旅游。请给你父母写一封电子邮件，告诉他们你在北京旅游的情况。

要求：语句通顺，前后连贯，80词左右。邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

From：[e-mail]                                     To：[e-mail]

Subject：Trip                                               Date；May 5,2013

Dear Mom and Dad，

I am writing this e-mail to tell you my trip in Beijing.

Love，

Kevin

Answer

Dear Mom and Dad,

I am writing this e-mail to tell vou my trip ki Beijing. Beijing is very big. Every morning I go for a walk with Danny and Jenny at Tian’anmen Square. Yesterday we went to the Great Wall. The weather was a little bit hot but we still had fun visiting it. This morning we went to the Palace Museum and we had Beijing duck for lunch. It was very nice. People in Beijing are very friendly and often help us find ways. We decide to go to the Summer Palace, Wangfujing Street and many other places in the next three days. I think we’ll have a good time.

See you soon.

Love,

Kevin

【解析】试题分析：这是一篇书信作文，要求中去北京旅游的情况是本文的写作要点。这些要点构成写作的基本框架。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般过去时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

点睛：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。