Question

初中时光即将结束，在这三年的学习与成长之中，你一定有很多收获与感恩，也有不少遗憾和愧疚，也许是朋友之间的一次争辩、对父母关怀的漠然，或是一次机会的错过，对老师或朋友的误解……校园电台广播【毕业季】发起了“One Thing I Regret in My Junior High School”的故事征集，请根据提示写一篇发言稿。

参考要点：

1.记叙你初中三年最遗憾的一件事（包括人物、地点、事情经过和结果）；

2.你的感悟，至少谈两点。

要求：

1.词数：80-120词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；

2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。

One Thing I Regret in My Junior High School

My life in junior high school will come to an end soon, ____________________________________

Answer

When I was in junior high school, I was really a bad boy．My history teacher—Mr．Oven criticized me a lot because I was naughty（淘气的）in his class．By the end of the first semester, I’d had enough of his words and had decided that I would get my revenge（报复）on him.

One morning when Mr．Oven was called to the office for a certain reason．While Mr．Oven left, my company Billy and I took Mr．Oven’s lunch bag from under his desk．I opened his sandwich and placed a worm（虫子） in between the two slices of bread. We put it back and closed it．To keep it in memory, Billy took photos of the whole process．We laughed for weeks over this.

【解析】本文要求以One Thing I Regret in My Junior High School为题记叙初中三年中最遗憾的一件事。这是一篇记叙文，要注意记叙文的基本要素：when, where, who, what, why等等要交待清楚。同时要谈谈自己的一些感悟。短文描述的是过去的经历，用一般过去时态，第一人称形式。短文要注意思想积极健康，中心要明确。要注意词汇、短语及句型的选择，使短文语句通顺，语义连贯，生动具体。

点睛：本范文分为三段：第一段讲述了事件的起因：历史老师经常批评我，淘气的我想要报复。第二段讲述的是报复的经过。第三段讲述事件的进一步发展及结果。短文层次清楚，条理分明，详略得当，中心突出。文中大量地运用了带有宾语从句、时间状语从句、定语从句的复合句，用了不定式作宾语、状语、宾语补足语等等，使得全文生动具体，文采飞扬。作者有意识地把故事的结尾与感恩节联系在一起，后悔之情，感恩之心自然流露，主旨鲜明。