Question

你校《英语园地》正在以“Active Learning”为题征文,请你写一篇文章投稿｡谈谈你擅长哪个学科,你如何帮助你同学学习的,为什么要帮助他/ 她｡

提示词语:English/ Chinese, maths ……, problem, explain, share, method ……

提示问题:

1.Which subject are you good at?

2.What do you do when your classmate needs your help with it?

3.Why do you help him/ her?

Answer

I’m good at English. I often help my classmates who are weak in it. First, when they have some problems with their English, I will explain to them clearly and patiently. Second, after class, we talk with each other in English as much as possible. What’s more, I share my methods of learning English with my classmates. For example, listening to some English radio and songs, reading text again and again and English story books, watching the English news, speaking English loudly in class. With my help, my classmates have made great progress in English, I also made more friends, that is why I like helping others.

【解析】这篇作文要求我们给《英语园地》进行投稿，讲述自己所擅长的学科，你如何学习的，你又是如何帮助同学学习的，为什么帮助他。题目中有三个提示问题，第一个是你擅长哪一门学科？第二个是当你的同学需要帮助的时候，你是怎么做的？第三个是你为什么要帮助他？我们可以依照这三个问题，组织语言，完成短文。通过分析可知，这篇短文我们应主要使用一般现在时态，第一人称来叙述，注意选择适当的词汇和句型去表达，不要逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语。在短文中还应使用一些连词、副词或者固定句型，使文章的表达更加流畅、通顺，意思也更加连贯。

点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文，短文按照题目要求介绍了自己擅长的学科、如何帮助同学学习以及为什么帮助他等内容。整篇作文内容完整、充实，层次清晰，有条理。语法规范，时态准确，主要使用了一般现在时态。作文里还使用了一些较好的句型，如I often help my classmates who are weak in it中使用了一个定语从句；First, when they have some problems with their English, I will explain to them clearly and patiently中使用了时间状语从句，两个副词的使用也很准确，增强了文章的表现力；Second, after class, we talk with each other in English as much as possible中短语as…as possible、What’s more, I share my methods of learning English with my classmates. For example， Listening to some English radio and songs, reading text again and again and English story books, watching the English news, speaking English loudly in class中短语What’s more, For example以及几个并列的现在分词形式，使文章非常的流畅、连贯。