Question

假设你是Li Ming, 你的笔友Lisa想了解在毕业之际, 你将为母校做些什么有意义的事.从下表所列的五项内容中, 至少选择两项, 用英语给Lisa写一封电子邮件.

Do something for My School
Volunteer to do (clean up the school, …)	Give something away (such as books, …)
Give suggestions (organize more activities, …)	Make the school more beautiful (plant trees,…)
Write to younger schoolmates (how to use time,…)	…

注意：(1)文中必须包括所选内容括号内的提示, 并适当发挥；

    (2)文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息；

    (3)词数：80--100；

    (4)短文开头供选择使用.不计入总词数.

Hello Lisa,

How is it going? It’s time for me to leave school. You ask me what I can do for my school.  _________________

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________                                                                  

Li Ming

Answer

Hello Lisa,

How is it going? It’s time for me to leave school. You ask me what I can do for my school. Here are my plans that l would like to share with you. First of all, I will volunteer to do some cleaning with my classmates, such as cleaning the windows and sweeping the floors. To keep our school clean, we will ask our schoolmates not to litter at school. Also, I will give away my favorite books to the school library so that our younger schoolmates can read more good books. And I will call on more schoolmates to do so.

It’s really hard for me to say goodbye. I wish my school to have a better future. (98 words)

Li Ming

Possible version 2

Hello Lisa,

How is it going? It’s time for me to leave school. You ask me what I can do for my school. Here are my plans I'd like to share with you. First of all, I plan to write a letter to the younger schoolmates, telling them to value the people around and get along well with them. And l will share my success and failure in study, too. Also, I will give some suggestions on ho w to make our school better. More trees and flowers must be planted. More after-class activities should be organized so that our schoolmates can join in them to relax. I hope all of our younger schoolmates can live and study happily in our school.(98 words)

Li Ming

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。主要介绍在毕业之际，你将为母校做些什么有意义的事。题目通过表格的方式为考生提供了五个选项内容，考生最少选取其中的两个来叙述。根据所做的事情是考生的计划，所以主要用将来时态。在介绍内容时，要注意选择合适语言，不要单一罗列事件。可以用first, second，或者，what’s more, also等来引出所做的事情，这样使文章更条理。

写作亮点：短文思路清晰，逻辑性强。句式变化多样，连词使用恰当。如：To keep our school clean, we will ask our schoolmates not to litter at school. ，I will give away my favorite books to the school library so that our younger schoolmates can read more good books.，More trees and flowers must be planted. More after-class activities should be organized so that our schoolmates can join in them to relax. IFirst of all,，Also,等。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.

考点：材料作文。