Question

你是Simon，以下是你的个人情况。请根据提示写一篇自我介绍。

要求：1.需涵盖全部所给信息；

2．词数90左右，可适当发挥。

Name:Simon Adams

Age:15

Nationality: Australian

Occupation:student

Favourite subjects:Physics, Music

Hobby:自拟

Weekday activities:自拟

Weekend activities:自拟

Future plan:自拟

My name is Simon Adams.___________________________________________________

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Answer

My name is Simon Adanis, I am an Australian student. I am fifteen years old. My favourite subjects at school are Physics and Music. I am a good singer. I love doing sports very much. I am good at swimming and playing rugby. On weekdays, I study very hard. Usually I have a walk with my parents after supper. On weekends. I often have parties. I like making friends. After a week’s hard work, I like staying at home and watching TV on Sundays. I have a dream. I want to be the leader of Australia. I know it’s not easy, but I will try my best to make my dream come true.

【解析】这篇作文要求我们以Simon的身份，根据所给的信息，写一篇自我介绍。这是一篇介绍自己的短文，类似这样的文章，在平时的学习中接触比较多，所用到的句型、短语学生们会感觉比较熟悉，所以写作其他比较得心应手。难点有三个：一个是要系统组织题目中所给的信息，不要杂乱无章，也不能遗漏要点；其中有些内容是需要学生自己来充实、补充的，如业余爱好、周末的活动未来的计划等等，这就要学生们自己发挥想象力来组织语言；第二个难点是使用正确的语法，英语句子和汉语不同，学生写作时，要注意从整体考虑，不能逐词翻译；最后就是为了提升文章档次，在短文中要使用一些较好的句型、连词和短语，使上下文的意思连贯、表达流畅。

点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文，短文中作者根据题目要求和所给的信息，介绍了自己的一些情况。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目中所有的要点，需要自己补充的内容也进行了完善，符合整篇文章的节奏。信息量足，且非常有条理；其次作文里使用了正确的时态和人称，谓语动词的形式和用法都很准确，语法合乎英语的表达需要，不是汉语式的英语；最后短文中使用了较多的短语和句型，如My favorite subjects at school are Physics and Music. 、I am good at swimming and playing rugby、After a week’s hard work, I like staying at home and watching TV on Sundays、I want to be the leader of Australia, I know it’s not easy, but I will try my best to make my dream come true等。