Question

假如你所在的城市正在创建“国家级卫生城市”，请你以“How to set up a national healthy city?”为题，根据所给提示写一篇80词以上的英语短文

要求：1.不要逐条翻译提示内容，注意逻辑合理。

2.语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁。

提示用词：throw rubbish; talk loudly; smoke; spit; in public; give seats to the old and children; be polite to others; obey traffic rules; have good life habits; keep ... clean;

How to set up a national healthy city?

Answer

How to set up a national healthy city?

Our city is trying to set up a national healthy city. Here is my advice. As a middle student, I think we should be polite to others. We are supposed to give seats to the old and children on the bus. It's necessary for us to have good life habits. Turn off the lights when we leave the room. Don't spit or throw rubbish everywhere, especially in public. As for our students, we mustn't smoke and we have to keep our city clean.

I'm sure our city will become more and more beautiful and clean as long as we try our best to do something for it.

【解析】这篇作文要求我们以How to set up a national healthy city为题，介绍一下如何才能建立一个国家级的卫生城市。这是一个话题作文，题目中只给出了题目，具体的内容需要学生们自己发挥想象力来充实。我们可以从两个方面来考虑：一个是城市的环境，另一个是人与人之间的关系。题目中给出了一些提示词，我们可以从这些提示词出发，组织写作的材料。写作时，注意使用正确的英语句式，不能逐词翻译，要从整体考虑应使用什么词汇、短语和句型。还需要注意上下文的连接，使过渡自然，文章的意思连贯，节奏紧凑。

点睛：这是一篇优秀的范文，短文根据题目的要求，介绍了自己对如何建立国家级卫生城市的观点。首先这篇短文内容完整、充实，作者在题目给出的提示词的基础上，合理运用，发挥想象力，连贯成了一篇流利的文章，条理清楚，表达准确；其次这篇短文使用了正确的时态和人称，句式表达符合英语的表达习惯，语法规范，词汇、句型运用准确；最后短文表达连贯，语言流畅，文章中使用了一些较好的句式，如As a middle student, I think we should be polite to others. 、We are supposed to give seats to the old and children on the bus. 、It's necessary for us to have good life habits、I'm sure our city will become more and more beautiful and clean as long as we try our best to do something for it等。