Question

在你成长的过程中一定会有一些你喜欢的，难以舍弃的物品，请以“My favorite thing”为题目写一篇不少于80个词的短文。（提示：采用第一人称或第二人称；用一般过去时和现在完成时）

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Answer

My favorite thing

I have kept many things that I like. But my favorite thing is a sweater. I have had it for six years.

When I was eight years old, I liked beautiful clothes. In a clothes store, I saw a beautiful sweater, I wanted to buy it. But my parents said it was too expensive. I was very sad. On my birthday, my parents bought me two books. To be honest, I didn’t like them. My aunt also bought me a gift. I can’t wait to open it. Wow, it was a beautiful sweater. I liked it very much. Although it is very old now, I still like it.

【解析】这篇作文要求我们以My favorite thing为题目，介绍一个你最喜欢的东西，并要求我们使用一般过去时和现在完成时。这是一个话题作文，题目中并没有规定要写的内容，只是给了我们一个标题，具体的内容需要学生们自己组织写作。首先应先选择一个自己最喜欢的东西，然后叙述自己是如何得到这个东西的，它为什么是你最喜欢的。所以这是一篇记叙文，在短文中应说清楚事情发生的时间、地点、人物、经过等细节。注意变化动词的正确形式，分清过去式和过去分词，并注意语法的准确和英语句式表达的习惯。在短文中还应使用一些好的句型和短语，使整篇文章的表达更加流畅。

点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文，短文中作者描写了他最喜欢的东西-一件毛衣。短文分成两段，首先开门见山点明自己最喜欢的东西是什么，I have kept many things that I like. But my favorite thing is a sweater. I have had it for six years.，用了连词but表示转折；第二段中作者详细记叙了这件东西是如何得到的，自己又是为什么喜欢它。这一段是文章的中心，所占篇幅较多，作者是按照事情发展的过程来描述的。里面使用了一些较好的句型，如When I was eight years old, I liked beautiful clothes中when引导时间状语从句；To be honest, I didn’t like them中短语to be honest；I can’t wait to open it中的句型can’t wait to do sth.等不及去做某事；Although it is very old now, I still like it.中让步状语从句等等。