Question

假设你是John，请根据下面信息给Tony写一封信，介绍一下你的新英语老师的外貌和爱好。

提示信息：中等身材，黑长发，大眼睛，喜欢穿红裙子白鞋子。擅长歌舞，最喜欢打排球。

要求：

1.可以发挥想象，但不能出现真实名称和地址：

2.不少于60词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Tony

I will tell you a piece of news                                                   

Yours,

John

Answer

We had a new English teacher this term. She is very beautiful .She is fit and thin . She has black hair and big eyes. She often wears a very beautiful red dress and a pair of white shoes. I like her class because her voice is beautiful and she is very kind. She is good at singing and dacing .She often teaches us English songs. She likes playing volleyball and she is also good at it .

【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，我给Tony写一封信，介绍一下我的新英语老师的外貌和爱好。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：My /Her name is……，be good at及do well in等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我们这学期换了一个新英语老师，接下来介绍我的新英语老师的外貌，最后介绍她的爱好。此处a pair of, be good at, like doing sth, play volleyball等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。