Question

《后羿射日》是一个古老的神话传说。请根据提示写一篇80词左右的短文，简单介绍一下这个故事。

提示：1.从前，天上只有一个太阳，人们生活得很幸福。

2.突然有一天，天上出现了10个太阳。气候是如此得热以至于庄稼干枯，动物死亡。人们生活得很是艰难。

3.有一个英雄叫后羿。他擅长射箭。于是，人们就请求他把多余的九个太阳射下来。

4.于是，后羿登上海边的一座高山，射掉了九个太阳。

5.人们非常感谢后羿。后来他娶了嫦娥，过上了幸福的生活。

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Answer

Hou Yi Shoots the Suns

Once upon a time, there was only a sun in the sky and people had a happy life. But one day ten suns appeared in the sky. The weather was so hot that all the crops and many animals died. People had a hard life.

There was a young man. His name was Hou Yi. He was good at shooting. So people asked him to shoot nine suns. So he climbed the high mountain beside the sea. He tried to shoot nine suns. Again, there was only a sun in the sky and people were very glad.

At last, Hou Yi married Chang’e and they lived happily.

【解析】试题分析：

这是一篇给材料作文，介绍《后羿射日》这个故事。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般过去时，人称为第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：there was……，The weather was……，He was good at……，So people asked him to……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了以前天上有一个太阳，人们过着幸福的生活，接下来介绍天上出现十个太阳，人们过着艰难的生活，后羿射掉九个太阳，最后后羿娶了嫦娥，过着幸福的生活。此处once upon a time, have a ……life, in the sky, so……that……,be good at, ask sb to do sth, try to do sth, at last等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。