Question

根据以下提示，以“My best friend ”为题，写一篇80 字左右的短文。

我的好朋友名叫Jeff, 15岁，在七年级六班。他戴眼镜，又高又强壮。他很刻苦，擅长数学和英语。

他喜欢绘画，是绘画俱乐部的一员。他每天七点骑车去上学。上午有四节课，下午两节课。有时放学后

和同学踢足球，有时帮助打扫教室。老师和同学都说他有礼貌，乐于助人，都很喜欢他。

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Answer

My best friend

Jeff is my good friend.His Chinese name is Wu Aihua.He's from Canada.He's in age of 15 this year and now is studying in Class6,Grade 7 in Hefei No.1 Middle School.He is tall and strong with glasses.His face looks a little bit long .He studies hard and does well in math and English.He likes drawing and is a member of the drawing club.He goes to school at seven by bike.There are four classes in the morning and two in the afternoon .After class,sometimes he plays football with their classmates . Sometimes he helps his classmates clean his classroom.He is polite and helpful to others and teachers.They all like him.

【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我的好朋友。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Jeff is……，He's……，He likes……，There are……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系.

点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我的好朋友的名字，接下来介绍他的年龄，班级，外貌，爱好，性格和活动，最后指出大家都喜欢他。此处a little bit, do well in, like doing sth, by bike, after class, help sb do sth, be helpful to等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。