Question

随着扬州经济的发展，私家车的数量不断攀升，同时我们的空气污染越发严重。去年冬天雾霾（the thick haze）天气接二连三出现，生活环境日趋恶化。就此，你班展开讨论美丽扬州应该从何做起。请根据下面提示写一篇短文，向报社投稿。

扬州现状	美丽扬州从我做起	未来展望
1.车辆越来越多 2.空气越来越差 3.……	1.出门做公交 2.…… 3.……	1.水更清，天更蓝 2.…… 3.…….

要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下连贯；

2）必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；

3）词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；

4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名。

100词左右(开头已写好，不计入总词数)

With the development of Yangzhou, more and more families have cars.  _____________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer

With the development of Yangzhou, more and more families have cars.However, the environment of our city is becoming worse and worse. Last winter, we experienced several days of the worst air pollution in history. And many people got sick because of the polluted air.

As the student of this ancient city, we should take actions to beautify our hometown. We can take buses to go out; we can ask our relatives not to drive cars as often as possible. What’s more, we can call on the whole society to plant more trees.

If each of us tries our best to protect our environment, I believe we will enjoy bluer sky and cleaner rivers. Yangzhou will be more suitable and comfortable to live in.

【解析】这篇作文要求我们给一个报社写一篇投稿，介绍扬州的空气污染情况。作文应包括三个主要内容，一个是扬州的现状，第二个是如何从自我做起，保护扬州的环境，最后是对未来的一个展望。题目中给出了简单的写作提纲，但是一些具体的内容需要学生们发挥想象力来补充完成，这是考查学生写作功底的一个很重要的项目。写作的时候，要注意上下文的连贯，将这些内容有机的连接起来，不要逐句翻译。使用一些好的句型和短语，注意正确的时态和语态以及谓语动词的形式，还需要注意英语表达和汉语习惯的不同，让整篇短文表达流畅。

点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文，短文中作者根据题目的要求介绍了扬州城市空气污染的情况，并提出了自己的建议，如何从自我做起，保护环境，还对未来扬州城市的变化进行了展望。短文内容完整，包括了题目要求的所有内容，合理发挥了自己的想象力，补充了具体的写作内容，使文章内容充实、完整。使用了正确的时态和人称，语法准确，符合英语的表达习惯。另外，短文中使用了丰富的句型和短语，如With the development of Yangzhou, more and more families have cars. However, the environment of our city is becoming worse and worse、As the student of this ancient city, we should take actions to beautify our hometown、What’s more, we can call on the whole society to plant more trees.、If each of us tries our best to protect our environment, I believe we will enjoy bluer sky and cleaner rivers等。