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阳光中学正举办主题为My dream home的征文比赛。假设你是Andy,想给学生会投 稿,请你根据下面的要点提示,写一篇70词左右的短文。要求包含所有要点,适当发 挥,语句通顺,书写整洁。

要点如下:

1. 梦想之家位于海边,很大,有两层;

2. 共有二十个房间,其中有一个大客厅、五间漂亮的卧室和一个大书房;

3. 房子外面有一个足球场,可以和朋友们一起踢球。

 

 

Sample writing I’m Andy from Class 1, Grade 7. I’d like to say something about my dream house. It is very big and is not far from the sea. In the house, there are two floors and twenty rooms in all. Among the rooms, there is a big living room, five nice bedrooms and a big study. Two bedrooms are for my parents and me, and the others are prepared for the guests. My favourite place is the football field outside, because I like football very much and I’d like to play football with my friends there. I also like walking on the beach. I can have fun every day after school. 【解析】这是一篇给材料作文,介绍我理想的家园。结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时,人称为单数第一,三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:I’m……; I’d like to……; It is……; there is……; My favourite place is……; because I like……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。 点睛:本文结构紧凑,语言简练。开头介绍了我的名字,接下来介绍我理想的家园的具体情况,最后指出我每天过的非常愉快。此处far from, in all, be prepared for, very much, would like to, like doing sth, on the beach, have fun, after school等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。  
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