Question

每个人在学校期间，都有自己难忘的老师。假如你叫李雷。毕业在即，请你根据以下提示给你的英语老师(Miss Zhao)写一封信。内容包括：

1．表达感激之情；

2．回忆印象最深的一件事(一次帮助，或一次鼓励，或一次批评……)；

3．你的感想或建议。

作文要求：

1．不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名；

2．语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Miss Zhao，

As you know, I've made great progress in English with your help. At this moment, I want to say “Thank you”．

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_________________________________________________________________________Best wishes to you!

Yours,

Li Lei

Answer

Dear Miss White

As you know, I’ve made great progress in study with your help. At this moment, I was to say“Thankyou”I will graduate in this Summer. It is memorable three years we spend together. All the things in this classroom will bring me back to the little things we enjoy together. I very appreciate the help and guide you give to me when I don't know how to do.

Perhaps, you have already forgotten, since it was only one of the millions you have done to us. But I will remember it forever. During that period, I was absorbed into computer game. I always fell asleep during class and my grade was decreasing. You always use your own time to help me, to study together with me. You never blame for anything. But I learned that I need to study hard for your help.

It is a good time in may life and I will cherish it forever. There is only one thing I want you to know before I finish. Take care of your health and I will always miss you. Yours

Lilei

【解析】试题分析：这篇作文叫小作者介绍自己印象最深的一件事。句子要完整，表达准确，注意时态的变化和主谓一致。文中可适当使用一些连接词来加强文章的逻辑性。

写作亮点：这篇作文结构清晰完整，表达准确流利，要点齐全。文中有一些好的表达方式如During that period, I was absorbed into computer game. I always fell asleep during class and my grade was decreasing. You always use your own time to help me, to study together with me.等等。

考点：话题类作文。