Question

书面表达

紧张而充实的一学年又要结束了,东台市首届阳光少年的评选活动正如火如荼地进行。假如你是David，请根据下表所提示的内容，写一封推荐信，推荐你的同学Tom（七年级四班）获取今年的最佳学生奖。

学  习	努力学习，所有学科都学得很好。
能  力	篮球打得好，他想下学期进入校篮球队。
爱  好	喜爱动物，他在家养兔子当宠物并把它照顾得很好。
品  德	1. 乐于助人，经常帮助同学复习功课。 2. 热心、有礼貌，在公共汽车上 ……

要求： 1.条理清楚，语意连贯。2.紧扣主题，适当发挥。3.书写规范，标点正确。正文80字左右。信的开头称呼和结尾落款已经写好，不计入字数。

Dear Sir,

   I am writing to recommend Tom for this year’s Best Student Award.

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I think Tom has all the qualities to get the award.

Yours

David

Answer

Sample writing

Dear Sir,

I am writing to recommend Tom for this year’s Bravest Student Award.

Tom is a hard-working student. He does well in all his lessons.

Tom has many hobbies. He likes playing sports very much and basketball is his favorite. He is going to join the school basketball team next term. He loves animals, so he keeps a rabbit as a pet and takes good care of it at home.

Tom is so helpful that he often helps his classmates with their lessons. He is also a kind and polite boy. He always gives his seat to the old people on the bus.

I think Tom has all the qualities to get the award.

Yours

David

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇表格作文。根据表格内容可知主要从学习，爱好，能力，品德四个方面介绍汤姆的情况。由于所给的内容非常详细，所以我们只要 用正确的语言表达，用合适的连词把文章链接起来就可以了。因为是介绍人物，所以主要用一般现在时态。

写作亮点：这篇短文内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确。复合句的运用为文章增色，如：Tom is so helpful that he often helps his classmates with their lessons.；He loves animals, so he keeps a rabbit as a pet and takes good care of it at home.

考点：提纲作文。