Question

书面表达

在黔南州建州六十周年到来之际，请你以志愿者Li Hua的身份向中外友人宣传我们的家乡——黔南，并倡导大家做文明市民，让家乡变得更加美丽。

要点提示：

1.介绍你的家乡

①美丽的风景；②宜人的气候；③传统的工艺；④悠久的茶文化。

2.倡导：

①诚实友善；②乐于助人；③保护环境，低碳生活。

要求：

  1.必须用上以上信息，可适当发挥；

2.要求句子连贯，语意通顺，书写规范；

3.词数不少于80词，文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；

4.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

参考词汇：traditional arts， citizen（市民）， low-carbon（低碳）

Hello! My name is Li Hua. I’m a middle school student. Welcome to my hometown –Qiannan. It lies in the south of Guizhou Province.______________________________________________________________

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Thank you!

Answer

One possible version:

Hello! My name is Li Hua. I’m a middle school student. Welcome to my hometown – Qiannan. It lies in the south of Guizhou Province. There are many beautiful places， such as Xiaoqikong， Doupeng Hill and so on. It’s popular with people not only for its fantastic weather but also for its fresh air. It also has many traditional arts with their own national forms. What’s more， it’s famous for tea， such as Duyun Maojian， Guiding Yunwu，etc

As a citizen in Qiannan， it’s our duty to make our hometown better. I think we should be honest and kind. We are ready to help others. It’s necessary for us to protect the environment and we should live a low-carbon life.

In my opinion， if everyone tries his best to do something for our hometown， it will become more and more beautiful.

Thank you!

【解析】

试题分析：本题是一篇给提纲作文，要求根据有关提示，介绍黔南，并倡导大家做文明市民，让家乡变得更加美丽。根据提示信息，短文要从“介绍”和“倡导”两个方面进行写作。短文用一般现在时态，第一人称形式。

写作亮点：本范文按提示要求进行写作，包含了提示的所有要点：第一段介绍黔南；第二段倡导人们努力争作文明市民，把家乡变得更加美丽；第三段提出自己的看法，对未来充满希望。短文层次清楚，条理分明。第一段中的not only…but also…， with短语；be famous for等等；第二段中的it’s one’s duty to do sth; be ready to do sth; 不定式作主语的句型；第三段里的try one’s best to do sth等等结构的准确使用，使短文生动具体，文采斐然。

考点：考查提纲作文。