Question

书面表达

你们班级新来了一位交换生Peter，他想要更多地了解苏州，请你按照下面表格的内容，写一篇文章介绍苏州。

地理位置	中国东部
城市环境	人很友善，乐于助人；有许多社区中心，社区中心有不同技能的社会工作者，他们帮助人们解决各种问题。
交通状况	交通便利（convenient）,公交车可以带你到任何地方
家乡评价	至少一点

注意：1.词数80左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）；

2.文章内容需包含表格所有内容，并且进行相关补充和拓展；

3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。

Suzhou is a great city with a long history.

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Answer

Suzhou is a great city with a long history.

My hometown Suzhou is in the east of China. It is a modern city.

There are many beautiful parks in my hometown. In the parks, we can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing. We can also go walking there.

People in Suzhou are very kind and they are always ready to help others. Lots of community centers are in my hometown. There, social workers with different skills help people with all kinds of problems.

The traffic is very convenient. You can go anywhere by bus.

My hometown is a wonderful place to visit. I hope you can come and visit soon.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，写前要认真浏览表格中的信息，把握写作的大体方向，运用恰当的语言把所列举的内容准确地表达出来。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，要注意句子的主语的变化及主谓一致的问题。句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：It is .....There are......及I hope ......等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。

写作亮点：这篇短文根据表格中的信息提示简明、扼要地阐明了苏州的地理位置，历史文化，风土人情，交通及等等。并包含了文中所要求的全部信息。文章语言规范，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清楚。My hometown is a wonderful place to visit. I hope you can come and visit soon.最后是对家乡的评价，并诚邀来客是文章的亮点所在。

考点：提纲类作文。