Question

情景作文

“邵阳是我家，创卫靠大家！”作为中学生，我们应积极参与文明卫生城市的创建活动中去。请根据以下提示，写一篇80词左右的短文(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。

要点：

(1)尊敬老师，对人礼貌；

(2)帮助他人，友善待人；

(3)遵守交规，过马路走斑马线，不闯红灯；

(4)保护环境，不乱扔垃圾，不踩草地等；

(5)补充两句个人观点。

参考词汇：respect(尊敬)；be polite to；obey(遵守)；traffic rules；zebra crossing(斑马线)

要求：

(1)内容包括所提供的信息及要点，可适当发挥，但不要逐条翻译；

(2)不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息。

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Answer

Shaoyang is now making its effort to become a national civilized city. As students, what should we do?

We must respect our teachers and be polite to others. We should also help those who are in need and be friendly to the people around us. Besides, we must obey the traffic rules. When crossing the streets, we should walk on the zebra crossing. And we mustn't go across the street when the traffic lights are red. What's more, we should protect our environment. For example, we mustn't step on the grass and climb trees. Litter mustn't be thrown everywhere.

Shaoyang is our hometown. Let's try our best to make it a civilized city.

【解析】

试题分析：本文属于给出一个主题，对这个主题的相关内容进行论述。实际上就是要求书写一份倡议书。人称为第一人称。动笔前先要注意认真阅读材料，确定写作内容；文章必须包括要点中所给的信息，并补充两条个人的观点，但不要逐句翻译。注意表达的条理性，用好连接词，可适当发挥使行文连贯，丰富文章的文采。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练，层次分明。开头介绍邵阳正积极投身于创建卫生城市的活动中。我们作为中学生，能够为此做些什么呢？发出倡议，然后根据要点提示，展开论述。最后向社会发出呼吁：Let’s try our best to make it a civilized city. 具有号召力。

考点：话题类作文。