Question

书面表达

你家前面有一个公园，很多人喜欢到那里去玩。现在是星期六上午十点，你的朋友们都在公园里。根据下面表格的提示，写一篇60词左右的小短文来描述一下他们各自在做什么吧。

Dave, Jim and Kevin	Kate and Sally	Linda	Julie	Tom and Ken	Brad
play soccer	dance	play the guitar	read a book	swim in the pool	listen to music

Answer

One possible version：

There is a park in front of my home, and many people like to play there. Now it is ten o’clock on the morning of Saturday. My friends are there. Dave and Jim are playing soccer on the playground. Kate and Sally are dancing. Linda is playing the guitar under a tree. Julie is reading. Tom and Ken are swimming in the pool. Brad is listening to music. They are having a good time.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍作者的朋友在公园里玩的情景。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查现在进行时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：There is...，Now it is...，Dave and Jim are...，They are...等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系.

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我家前面有很多朋友在那里玩，接下来介绍他们具体的活动，最后表达他们玩得高兴。此处like to do sth,play soccer, on the playground, play the guitar, under the tree, in the pool, listen to music, have a good time等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

考点：提纲作文。