Question

书面表

暑假即将来临，你们学校社团正在招募暑期环保爱心志愿者，李明准备报名参加。请你帮他写一封申请函，要点如下：

姓名	李明
个性	非常有条理，总是使东西井然有序 乐于助人，从不介意为班级做额外的工作
环保生活	为了节约用水，刷牙时总是关掉水龙头 购物时总是自带购物袋而不使用塑料袋 --------(帮他再写一点环保措施)
爱心活动	曾捐书给贫困地区的孩子们 上学期为一位患心脏病的孩子举行了慈善义演并为她的手术募集到足够的资金

1. 短文必须包括以上所有要点, 并作适当发挥。

2. 词数100 左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

3. 参考词汇：有条理的organized    额外的extra    塑料plastic  疾病disease

捐献donate       慈善charity    手术operation (n)

Dear principle

I’m Li Ming. I want to be a volunteer of the society of our school.

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I think I have the qualities to be a volunteer. I will be very happy if I can be a member of our society.

Yours sincerely

Li Ming

Answer

Dear principle

I’m Li Ming. I want to be a volunteer of the society of our school.

Let me introduce myself first. I’m well organized and always keep my things in order. I’m helpful too. I never mind doing extra work for my class. As a result, I’m popular in my class.

I think I have developed a green lifestyle in my daily life. In order to save water, I always turn off the tap when I brush my teeth. And I also turn off the power when the TV or computer is not in use so that I can save power. I always take my own bags instead of plastic bags when shopping.

I used to donate books to children in poor areas. Last term I held a charity show for a child with a heart disease and raised enough money for his operation.

I think I have the qualities to be a volunteer. I will be very happy if I can be a member of our society.

Yours sincerely

Li Ming

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文给出了一些要点，并给出了作文的开头和结尾。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：这篇短文多次使用固定句型如In order to，instead of，used to，so that等等，为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

考点：话题作文。