Question

写作。

在地球上居住着形形色色的动物，它们居住环境不同，生活习性也不同，请以My Favourite Animal为题，根据下列提示完成一篇作文，字数80字左右，题目已给出，不计入字数中。

1. Where does it live?

2. What does it look like?

3. What does it eat?

4. What does it like/dislike doing?

My Favorite Animal

Answer

My Favorite Animal

I like animals very much, such as horses, monkeys, cats, tigers and so on. But I like dogs best. Why? Because they are very cute and nice.

I have a white dog. Its name is Bobo. She is a female dog. She comes from Beijing, China. She wears white clothes and she has two big eyes and a small month. She often walks round and round at home. It has nothing to do. She likes eating ice-cream so much. so do I. When I eat ice-cream, she will look at the ice-cream carefully, so I will give her some to eat.

I think Bobo is the cutest dog in the world.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，就“My Favourite Animal这一话题开展介绍。动笔前要先认真阅读要点，尽量将提示的内容利用上；以提示的问题作为写作的主线，结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第一人称，一般现在时态进行叙述。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：本文紧扣材料，要点完整，表达清晰流畅。文中用到了很多短语，如：such as，come from; walk round and round等等。另外时态运用非常准确，语言准确，语意连贯，表达清楚，没有任何语法错误。倒装结构的使用She likes eating ice-cream so much. so do I.给文章增添了不少色彩。

考点：话题类作文。