Question

书面表达

David参加了一个社区的交友活动，请根据下表所提示的内容，介绍他的新朋友Tom。

学习	1.爱学习。努力学习，所有学科都学得很好。 2.爱助人。经常帮助同学复习功课。
爱好	1.爱运动。篮球打得好，下学期想进入校篮球队。 2.爱动物。养兔子当宠物，并能照顾好。
评价	对Tom的评价(自拟)

要求:1. 词数80左右。短文开头部分己为你写好，不计入总词数;

2. 条理清楚，语意连贯;紧扣主题，适当发挥;书写规范，标点正确;

3. 短文中不要出现具体的学校姓名和人名。

Tom is my new friend.

Answer

Tom is my new friend. He is twelve years old. He is tall and thin. He works hard so he can always get good grades at all his subjects. He often helps us with our subjects and I often help him with his Chinese. He likes doing sports and he is good at playing basketball. He wants to join the school basketball team next term. He loves animals. He keeps a rabbit as a pet. He takes good care of the rabbit. He is so kind and warm-hearted that I like him very much.

【解析】

试题分析：本题要求介绍自己的新朋友，根据表格提示要求，要从人物的学习、爱好及对人物的评价三个方面进行写作。短文用一般现在时态，第三人称单数形式。要注意短语的运用和句型的选择。所写句子要注意语意连贯，紧扣主题。

写作亮点：本范文包含了提纲所列所有要点，条理清楚，中心明确，主题突出。文中用的work hard, get good grades, help sb. with sth, like doing sth, want to do sth, take good care of 等短语运用恰当，使本文生动具体。是一篇较好的范文。

考点：考查提纲作文。