Question

书面表达

假设你是悉尼大学一名华裔学生，名叫Jason Wu。你从China Daily土看到该报正在开展主题为Change for a Better China的环保讨论活动。你打算结合自己所居住的小镇的变化，给报社写一封英文信参与讨论。内容提示见下表：

注意事项：

1. 英文信须包括表格中所有提示内容，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；

2. 表格中“感想建议”一栏须用2-3句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥；

3. 词数在90个左右，信的首尾己在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；

4. 信件内容必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。

小镇概况	Hartwell，人口约5,000，“澳洲最美小镇”之一
过去状况	当地入冬天燃木取暖，引起空气污染、树木被伐
应对措施	立法阻止此类活动，鼓励使用清洁能源
感想建议	……

参考词汇：

澳洲最美小镇(Australia's Nicest Towns)    清洁能源(clean energy)

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Answer

Dear Editor

I am a student of Sydney University. I am living in a small town called Hartwell with a population of around 5,000. It is one of the "Australia's Nicest Towns". But things were very different in the past. The local people used to bum wood to keep their houses warm in winter. That caused serious air pollution and a lot of trees were cut down. Laws were soon made to stop this and people were encouraged to use clean energy. I think we can do something similar in China. Perhaps we can start with using less oil. / believe we can make our world a better place if we keep trying.

Yours sincerely,

Jason Wu

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文叫小作者从China Daily土看到该报正在开展主题为Change for a Better China的环保讨论活动。给出了写作的提纲，在写作时要构思好文章的结构，注意要点一定齐全。句子要完整，表达准确，注意时态的变化和主谓一致。文中可适当使用一些连接词来加强文章的逻辑性。

写作亮点：这篇作文结构清晰完整，表达准确流利，要点齐全。文中有一些好的表达方式如But things were very different in the past. The local people used to bum wood to keep their houses warm in winter. That caused serious air pollution and a lot of trees were cut down.等等。

考点：考查提纲作文。