Question

情景作文

假如你是Sandy。请根据提示词语，介绍一下你的好朋友Gina Green。提示词：

friend, name, birthday,  favorite subject, English, interesting, favorite sport,  tennis, relaxing, after school, play tennis, want to be, a teacher.

要求：1.句子通顺、语意连贯；2.文章应包含所给提示词；3.不少于50词。

Hello!My name is Sandy. I have a good friend.______________________________________________________

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Answer

Hello! My name is Sandy. I have a good friend. Her name is Gina Green. She is 13 years old and her birthday is on September 25th . Her favorite subject is English, because it is very interesting. Her favorite sport is tennis. She thinks it is relaxing. She often plays tennis with her classmates after school. She wants to be a teacher when she grows up.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文要求我们介绍自己的好朋友Gina，题目中没有给出具体的写作的内容，但是给了我们一些提示词语，如name, birthday, favorite subject, sport等等，这些提示语告诉了我们短文里应写什么内容，因此我们需要将这些词语，串联成句子，表达出完整的意思。介绍人物的文章题材是学生们非常熟悉的，句型和词汇也很常见，写这篇作文的时候，我们尤其是要注意正确的人称和时态。这篇作文我们应使用一般现在时态，第三人称she来叙述，因此要特别注意谓语动词第三人称单数形式的变化，这是初一学习中的一个重点和难点。写作的时候，还需要注意语句之间的连接，全文意思要流畅、连贯。

写作亮点：这是一篇优秀的作文，这篇作文内容完整，包含了题目中说给的所有信息，没有遗漏要点。作文里也使用了正确的时态和人称，特别是注意了谓语动词第三人称单数形式的变化，如She thimks…, She often plays…等，be动词的使用也很准确。这篇短文里使用了because 引导的原因状语从句，还有thinks这个动词后跟宾语从句这些句型，运用很准确，符合英语的表达习惯。作文里的好句型有She is 13 years old and her birthday is on September 25th、Her favorite subject is English, because it is very interesting、She wants to be a teacher when she grows up等。

考点：提纲类作文。