Question

书面表达。

根据下表提示，以The Changes in My Hometown为题，写一篇80词左右的短文。

过去	1.生活贫困，房屋破旧。 2.污染严重，垃圾遍地。 3.交通不便，游客很少。
现在	1.生活：住房宽敞、明亮；许多人有自己的汽车。 2.环境：山更绿，水更清，天更蓝…… 3.旅游：每年有成千上万来自世界各地的游客。
将来	请你展望家乡的未来。

The Changes in My Hometown

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Answer

The Changes in My Hometown

In the past, my hometown was very small. People lived a poor life. The houses were old and small.

Pollution was very serious, and there was rubbish everywhere. The transportation was not convenient, so few visitors came here.

Now great changes have taken place in my hometown. The environment has become much better. The mountains have turned greener. The rivers are clearer and the sky is bluer. There are trees, flowers and grass

everywhere. People live a better life. Their houses are large and bright. Many people have their own cars.

Every year, thousands of people from all over the world come to visit our city. I'm sure my hometown will become better and better in the future.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇作文叫小作者写一篇自己家乡的变化，小作者首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。小作者还必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：这篇短文不仅使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。如Now great changes have taken place in my hometown. Every year, thousands of people from all over the world come to visit our city. I'm sure my hometown will become better and better in the future.等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

考点：考查提纲类作文。