Question

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去年，绍兴市区有200个公共自行车站点、5000辆自行车投入使用。请根据表格内容写一篇短文，倡导绍兴市民绿色出行。

现状	1．交通拥挤； 2．停车困难； 3．……
骑车优点	1．方便（在医院、学校、公园旁可租车rent）； 2．便宜（1小时内免费）； 3．……
你的希望	……

要求：1. 短文必须包括表中全部内容，并补充“现状”和“骑车优点”各1条；

2. “你的希望”至少在两句以上；

3. 文章结构紧凑、行文连贯、表达清楚；

4. 词数：80-100.。开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Last year, 200 public bicycle stops and 5000 bicycles were put into use in Shaoxing. Nowadays, _______________________________________________________________________

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Answer

Last year, 200 public bicycle stops and 5000 bicycles were put into use in Shaoxing. Nowadays, you can often see streets crowded with cars. What’s more, it’s difficult to find some places to park cars. However, riding bicycles can help solve the problem. First, it’s really convenient to rent a bike. You can rent one near hospitals, schools and parks. Besides, it’s free if you rent for less than one hour. And the most important thing is that riding bikes produces no pollution and it can help protect our environment.

I hope more and more people can choose to go out by bicycle. It’s not only good for the environment, but also for our own health.

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。要求语句通顺、意思连贯。文章结构紧凑、行文连贯、表达清楚。

写作亮点：本文按照写作要求，根据汉语提示，用简洁的语言，准确地表达出汉语意思，语言流畅。本文写作思路清晰，特别是一些连词的运用，比如：Nowadays, What’s more, However, First, Besides等，使语意更加连贯，层次分明。并依据要求，提出了自己的希望：I hope more and more people can choose to go out by bicycle. It’s not only good for the environment, but also for our own health. 倡导市民绿色出行。

考点：提纲类作文。