Question

书面表达.  (共10分)

假如你是林涛，你的美国笔友Jim对中国的传统文化很感兴趣。请你用英语给他写一封70词左右的电子邮件，介绍一个你最喜爱的中国的传统节日。

要求：1.开头和结尾已给出 ，不计入总词数 2.书写要规范、工整。

Answer

Hello, Jim! I am glad to hear from you . In the letter you asked how we Chinese celebrate our Spring Festival. Now I will tell you something about it . Before that day all the families are busy preparing for it. We often buy some delicious food , some drinks and new clothes for the children. All the family will dress up, clean their houses and decorate them. At the Spring Festival Eve We will eat jiaozi to say goodbye to last year and welcome the new year . On that day We will give their children some lucky money, and we visit relatives and friends，and say to them :“Happy New Year.！”I think you will be interested in the spring festival. Come to China and celebrate our Spring Festival with us.

Yours,

Lin Tao

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文要求我们根据所给信息，写一篇关于对中国的传统文化英语小短文。我们应运用正确的熟悉的英语句子写出怎样节的过程。把我们熟悉的素材，要尽量使用一些好的句型和连词，最好使用我们熟悉和背过的句型，尽量不要使用复杂的从句，减少语法错误，不要犯单词拼写上的错误。使文章的意思衔接自然，使文章上下文意思连贯，写出精彩。使用熟悉的句型I am glad to hear from you . 很高兴收到你的来信，Now I will tell you something about it .现在我将告诉你关于春节的一些事。 也使用了熟悉的短语be busy doing sth.忙于做某事。Prepare for 准备做某事。say goodbye to向谁说再见等等。

写作亮点：这是一篇比较优秀的作文，短文中作者把自己熟悉的节日---春节详细的介绍给Jim，短文中的语言合乎英语的表达规范，语言简洁，使用了我们熟悉的句型和短语，把我们过春节过程写的很生动，基本没有语法错误和单词拼写上的错误，减少扣分点。使用介词，使文章连接自然，意思连贯，如春节前Before that day，除夕At the Spring Festival Eve，春节那一天On that day；最后邀请Jim来个我们一块过春节，Come to China and celebrate our Spring Festival with us.语言包含情感，使文章增色。

考点：考查话题作文。