Question

书面表达（共1题，计20分）

学校将在下周举行英文演讲比赛，你的话题是 “对我影响最深的人”。请根据以下材料，组织一篇100字左右的英文演讲稿，介绍一下两位对你影响最深的人，并说说你的感想。

Persons	Job	Details
My mother	a teacher	1. be in her forties; 2. like yellow...(自拟一个原因）; 3. have a heart full of love...（自拟一例说明）; 4. decide to donate her body after her death； 5...(自拟感想一条）
Spud Webb	a player	1. be born in Texas, the USA； 2. never give up when he was refused; 3. practise hard ; 4. become the shortest player in the NBA; 5...(自拟感想一条）

The persons who have influenced me most

I am happy to give a speech here. There are two persons who have influenced me most. They are my mother and Spud Webb.

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Answer

The persons who have influenced me most

I am happy to give a speech here. There are two persons who have influenced me most. They are my mother and Spud Webb.

My mother is a teacher.She is 40 years old. She is of medium height.Yellow is her favorite color. She thinks that color is the symble of hard feeling. She is full of love. She often helps others. She has a heart full of love. To my surprise, she has decided to donate her whole body for medical research when she die.

Spud Webb is a player.He was born in Texas, the USA. At first,he often was refused. But he never gave up when he was refused . He tried to practice so hard that he became the shortest player in the NBA at last . From his story, we know that if we try our best, we will succeed some day.

They are all my heroes. From now on , I will learn from them.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文，要点给出的比较详细，在写作时只要注意时态的正确使用，把要点补充完整就可以了。在写作提纲作文时要注意一下几点：仔细审题。注意题目的具体要求，明确写作要求，确立文章要用的时态。本文应以一般现在时为主。注意写作要点，理出写作框架。本篇书面表达的要点已经给出，应注意将提示的内容写完全，不要遗漏。连句成篇，注意语言的连贯和过渡。在写作中适当使用连词，会使文章过渡自然。最后还需检查单词拼写、标点符号、大小写等细节问题。

写作亮点: 这篇短文内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。 文中使用了一些连接词如so…that等等，也使用了一些复合句和并列句，这些都为文章增色不少。

考点：提纲作文。