Question

书面表达（本题有1小题；共计20分）

文明社会，从我做起。请就下图的不文明行为和所产生的后果用英语写一篇短文，向校刊English Garden投稿，倡导做文明人。

注意：（1）短文必须包括所给图片的信息，合理想象并补全第3幅图片的内容。

（2）必须谈谈你对此事的看法。

（3）文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。

（4）词数：80~100.短文首句 仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。

短文首句：Last Sunday afternoon,I went to the park with my cousin.

参考词汇：果皮 skin，踩在……上摔倒 slip on（slipped，slipped），救护车ambulance

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Answer

Last Sunday afternoon, I went to the park with my cousin. When we were walking around,we saw a boy eat a banana and throw the skin on the ground. Just as we were going to pick it up, a man slipped on the skin. He was badly hurt and couldn't move. We called 120. Soon an ambulance came and took him to the hospital.

It was really bad of the boy to do that! We must say no to this bad behaviour. Everyone should care about his daily behaviour and follow the social rules so that the world will he a better place. (93 words)

Possible versions 2

The story in the pictures shows a boys’bad behaviour. One day, a boy went to the park for a walk. He ate a banana and threw the skin on the ground. A moment later, he came back. Without noticing the skin, he slipped on it. He was hurt so badly that he couldn’t move. Someone passed by and called 120. Soon an ambulance came and took him to the hospital nearby.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一个看图作文的题目。主题是环保，这个主题很普遍，学生写起来也会比较得心应手。图片相对来说非常简单，第一幅图是一个小男孩吃着一根香蕉；第二幅图中，男孩把吃剩的香蕉皮随手扔到了路上；第三幅图是空白的；第四幅图是一辆疾驰的救护车。因为图片内容简单，第三幅图更是没有什么内容，所以对考生想象力的发挥有较高的要求，相对来说，考生发挥的空间也更大。考生需要注意的是要确定事件的发生背景，故事要用一般过去时叙述。

写作亮点：第一篇参考文章设置的场景比较具体，时间地点都交待的很清楚。并且文章以第一人称叙述，在叙事中加入了“I”这个角色，使故事更加生动可感。在故事最后还发表了自己的观点。叙述议论结合，使主题更加鲜明。另外文章中像Just as、be going to、pick up 、so that 等亮点词组的运用也使文章增色不少，使文章表达起来更加流畅，议论也更加有力。

第二篇参考文章则只是客观叙述，按照题目要求把图片的内容叙述清楚，运用第三人称，适当的发挥想象，把四副图片连成一个完整的故事，也表达了文章环保的主题。本文胜在叙事简练，语言简洁有力。

【考点定位】图画作文。