Question

书面表达（15分）

假设你是李华，对目前中国出现的雾霾(the smog)天气非常担忧，向China Daily(中国日报)的编辑写了一封英语信件，希望引起人们的重视，内容如下：

天气状况	雾霾天气影响中国的许多地方
雾霾的原因	全国的工厂排放出许多废气；近年来城市的汽车越来越多等。空气污染严重
雾霾的危害	危害人们身体健康，引发多种疾病甚至癌症；引起交通堵塞，甚至交通事故
希  望	人们外出最好少开小车，多坐公交车、骑自行车或步行；尽量不燃放烟火，尤其春节时；选择空气环保产品；多种树木……

参考词汇:

废气: waste gas

空气污染: air pollution

引起：cause

多种疾病: many kinds of illnesses

癌症: cancers

交通堵塞: traffic jam

燃放烟火: set off fireworks

空气环保产品：air-friendly products

要求：

1．词数：70词左右。

2．信件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

3．文中不得出现真实的人名与校名。

Dear editor,

I’m Li Hua. I’m a middle school student. I’m worried about the smog weather in my country. Can your newspaper ask people to pay much attention to it?

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Thanks a lot!

Best wishes,

Li Hua

Answer

The smog weather has influenced many places of China. Why is it so serious? Because factories all over our country produce so much waste gas into the air, and there are more and more cars in the city in recent years, and so on. So the air pollution is becoming serious in China now.

The smog is a danger to people’s life. It’s harmful to our health. It can cause many kinds of illnesses, even cancers. It can also cause traffic jam, and sometimes even traffic accidents.

So I think everyone should protect the environment. When we go out, we’d better drive cars less, and try to go by bus, by bike or on foot instead. We should try not to set fireworks, especially during the Spring Festivals. It’s good for people to choose air-friendly products. And we should plant more trees to make the world greener, so the air will be fresh…

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文给出了写作的提纲，在写作时要构思好文章的结构，注意要点一定齐全。句子要完整，表达准确，注意时态的变化和主谓一致。文中可适当使用一些连接词来加强文章的逻辑性。

写作亮点：这篇作文结构清晰完整，表达准确流利，要点齐全。文中有一些好的表达方式如Because factories all over our country produce so much waste gas into the air, and there are more and more cars in the city in recent years, and so on. When we go out, we’d better drive cars less, and try to go by bus, by bike or on foot instead. We should try not to set fireworks, especially during the Spring Festivals..等等。

考点：考查提纲类作文。