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书面表达(15分)

冬奥会中,速滑小将王濛冬奥会摘金 跪拜教练李琰的场面给我们留下了很深的印象。那么你是否也同样的感受,毕业临近之际,你想对你的老师说些什么,或者你想为你的老师做些什么来表达自己的心情和想法。请写出来。(80词左右,可以写成书信格式)

 

 

 

 

Dear Miss Li: First of all, I should thank you for your help. Three years ago, I was a little kid, I knew nothing about my study, my life and my teachers. I was unfamiliar with everything. With your help, I began to realize how to be a good student, how to study and how to achieve my dream. Thanks to your help, I thought that I have changed a lot. Now, I will leave you. It makes me sad. I ‘ll never forget you. Miss Li, please believe in me, I will try my best to study hard in the future. Yours Li Hua 【解析】 试题分析:初三临近毕业之际,学生们心里肯定有很多话想说,这篇作文就让我们在这个情景下,写一写想对老师说的话。题目中没有具体提到该写什么,所以这篇作文是开放性的。通过分析我们可以知道,在这样的临别之际,学生对老师的感受应该是感激,感谢和祝福。三年来,老师无私的培育学生们成长,在学习、生活各方面帮助学生,这些内容我们要用正确的英语表达出来,语言准确,合乎外语的表达方式。写作时,要注意有条理,不要一会说这个,一会又说那个。可以使用总分总这样的结构,先对老师表示感谢,再细说为什么要感谢老师,最后写一写对老师的祝福。根据自己要表达是内容,确定正确的时态。 【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的范文,在文章中作者对自己的老师说出了自己心里的话。首先作者用一句话表达了对老师的感激之情,First of all, I should thank you for your help,感谢老师的帮助。接着作者具体写了自己这三年里,是如何在老师是关怀下成长的,这一部分主要使用了一般过去时态,I knew nothing about my study, my life and my teachers. I was unfamiliar with everything. With your help, I began to realize how to be a good student, how to study and how to achieve my dream.,这几个排比句的使用为文章增色不少。另外作者还使用了with one’s help、thanks to 等短语,也都非常准确。最后再次表达感谢,并下决心以后更加努力。整篇文章内容完整,结构合理,语言准确。 考点:话题作文。  
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