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请以“My dream”为题,写一篇短文。 1. 语句通顺流畅,时态正确。 2....

请以“My dream”为题,写一篇短文。

1. 语句通顺流畅,时态正确。

2. 字数在80个字左右。

 

 

 

 

Everyone has his dream. My dream is to be a doctor. When I was in Grade Seven, I was sick and often went to see doctors. The doctors were very friendly to me and they often cheered me up. With the help of them, I was getting better. Now I’m very healthy. Since then I have hoped to become a doctor. In order to achieve my dream, I will study hard. I’ll give my love to the patients as much as possible and help them out of danger. To be a doctor is really great. I think my dream will come true one day. 【解析】 试题分析:这是一篇话题作文。话题贴近学生学习生活,学生有较大的发挥空间。动笔前要认真审题,挖掘深层内涵,勾勒要点,并适当发挥。根据话题可知本文主要是第一人称,行文时注意时态语及主谓一致问题,同时注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。 【亮点说明】这篇短文内容表达准确,意思连贯,符合逻辑。在文章的结构组织上很好地使用了简单句和复合句,使文章自然流畅。同时,使用了一些常用的句式和短语,如:be friendly to sb、cheered sb up、With the help of、Since then、hoped to do sth、In order to、as much as possible、help sb out of、come true等,这为文章增色不少。在学习中注意积累,牢记一些常用句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。 考点:话题作文。  
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Michael: Thank you.

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