Question

假设你叫李华，你们市将要举行以“How to Eat in a Healthy Way”为题的演讲比赛，请你准备写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：

1.说明此次演讲的主题(how to eat in a healthy way)。

2.我们应该少吃、不吃及多吃的食物有哪些，并说明原因。

3.描述自己的健康饮食习惯，并举例说明。

4.希望大家都有个好的饮食习惯。

作文要求：

1）不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。

2）语句连贯，词数80个左右 (开头已给出)。

How to Eat in a Healthy Way

Hello, everybody. I'm Li Hua.

Answer

How to Eat in a Healthy Way

Hello, everybody. I'm Li Hua. Today my topic is how to eat in a healthy way. Firstly, we should never eat fried food or foods with lots of sugar because they are not good for health. Secondly, try to eat more vegetables and fruit because they can make us become much healthier.

My eating habits are good. For example, I often eat healthy foods, like wholemeal bread, eggs, vegetables and milk for breakfast and rice, noodles, and vegetables for dinner.

I hope everyone can eat in a healthy way.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇短文要求我们就“怎样健康地吃” 写一篇演讲稿。在题目中给了我们这篇短文的写作提纲，主要包括四部分的内容。一是说明此次演讲的主题(how to eat in a healthy way)；二是我们应该少吃、不吃及多吃的食物有哪些，并说明原因；三是描述自己的健康饮食习惯，并举例说明。四是希望大家都有个好的饮食习惯。提纲虽然已经列好，但是很多内容都需要我们自己去充实，让它变得完整、合理，内容丰富，这就需要花费我们的想象力，以及我们平时积累的知识。另外，写作时，还需注意语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者以提纲为顺序，讲述了如何健康地吃，层次清晰表达到位。短文中需要作者自己补充的内容完成得也不错。如I often eat healthy foods, like wholemeal bread, eggs, vegetables and milk for breakfast and rice, noodles, and vegetables for dinner.等。这些内容都比较贴合文章的需要，意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型，如Today my topic is how to eat in a healthy way. Secondly, try to eat more vegetables and fruit because they can make us become much healthier等。

考点：提纲类作文。